Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from BethShelby
This was a active chapter. Trever isn't going to get to have his high after all. I guess his dealer is dead as well. Garth is charming the women and overhearing a conversation all at once. It seems he going to be butting head with the local law enforcement again. Nice chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This was a active chapter. Trever isn't going to get to have his high after all. I guess his dealer is dead as well. Garth is charming the women and overhearing a conversation all at once. It seems he going to be butting head with the local law enforcement again. Nice chapter.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Hi, Beth...I don't think we've heard the last of Trevor though. He might have a trick or two up his sleeve that he will try to use in his favor. And Garth...that Cowboy can do more than one thing at a time any day.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
You're bringing me into more familiar ground with this episode, of course Garth Woodmen is not liked by Donatelli, being drawn in to the policeman's patch with a peculiarly related case, fancy that, it's all coming togeryher now, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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You're bringing me into more familiar ground with this episode, of course Garth Woodmen is not liked by Donatelli, being drawn in to the policeman's patch with a peculiarly related case, fancy that, it's all coming togeryher now, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Yes, Bring our Cowboy into the story and fireworks are going to fly. Donatelli is a bit jealous and also he might have lost a girl to Garth. Trouble is brewing.
Smiles, Carol
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I see it all
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I like the way your plot is developing, and how you are separating out the different scenes. Lot of continuity, and the characters are starting to take form.
Some real action starting to form here, and interaction between scenes and characters.
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I like the way your plot is developing, and how you are separating out the different scenes. Lot of continuity, and the characters are starting to take form.
Some real action starting to form here, and interaction between scenes and characters.
Great job,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Rhonda. Glad you are enjoying the story. My eyes are going cross trying to write, read, review and what ever else I am suppose to be doing.
Smiles, Carol
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I'll bet!!
Comment from Esther Brown
Again, I am hanging on every word. Like always, I wish I had a six but you don't need them. I have to double check with your site to be sure I didn't miss anything, and found you got a first while I was off playing on the Harley. Great job. Esther
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Again, I am hanging on every word. Like always, I wish I had a six but you don't need them. I have to double check with your site to be sure I didn't miss anything, and found you got a first while I was off playing on the Harley. Great job. Esther
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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The fact that you follow my stories faithfully is worth more than the six. I don't have a lot of people but I do know which ones I can count on. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent writing. Every chapter has been filled with action and intrigue. You will give me sensory overload if you keep this up. I'm caught up now, so I will be looking for the following chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Excellent writing. Every chapter has been filled with action and intrigue. You will give me sensory overload if you keep this up. I'm caught up now, so I will be looking for the following chapter.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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My eyes are giving out on me so its time to rest them. Hopefully they will be better in the morning because besides writing I need to read. Remind me why I love doing this. LOL
Smiles. Carol
Comment from karenina
This is one of those awesome chapters that have me swirling back and forth trying to recognize which characters are red herrings and who murdered Eleanor.
(Also, what was going on with Eleanor that she knew to request an autopsy --as she feared her life was in danger)
Oh, I KNOW I have a long way to go and some rip-roaring adventure before we get even close to that.
(P.S. -- It's fine. As long as Garth's involved, you can take as LONG as you want!)
(You're acing this, Carol!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is one of those awesome chapters that have me swirling back and forth trying to recognize which characters are red herrings and who murdered Eleanor.
(Also, what was going on with Eleanor that she knew to request an autopsy --as she feared her life was in danger)
Oh, I KNOW I have a long way to go and some rip-roaring adventure before we get even close to that.
(P.S. -- It's fine. As long as Garth's involved, you can take as LONG as you want!)
(You're acing this, Carol!)
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I've got a few women drooling and wondering which hunk (Michael or Garth) they want. Glad you are enjoying. I am using my laptop and its harder for me to write. Thanks sweetie!
Smile, Carol
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What we're you using before? A tablet?
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No, I use my desk top because I can enlarge things and the keyboard doesn't move, When I am in my laptop, I am in the recliner in my bedroom with my dogs.
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Ah! Desk top! I have one that hasn't worked in five years on my desk. I haven't figured out how to safely dispose of it...
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Desk top is the best! I can maneuver it far better than any of the others. Only thing is, I get huncg backed sitting in that chair all day. I need a knew one....someday.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done again! I like how you use different perspectives. It worked well here in showing different angles on Eleanor Bennett's murder and the surrounding events. This is another strong chapter with a promising setup for further developments.
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Nicely done again! I like how you use different perspectives. It worked well here in showing different angles on Eleanor Bennett's murder and the surrounding events. This is another strong chapter with a promising setup for further developments.
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Michael. It is nice that you notice that though my scenes are different with different people, they tie together at some point. Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I bet Garth's steak is cold. Does he charm every lady he meets? Of course. LOL
Matthew Donatelli (second heartthrob in this novel. LOL)
He smiled, "No, she's not." (smiled. Now what's this story???)
I will not shout it all over town (dialogue, 'I won't shout it all over town.' sounds more natural)
The Judge left, and Jackson ordered a double. (judge because of the 'the')
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I bet Garth's steak is cold. Does he charm every lady he meets? Of course. LOL
Matthew Donatelli (second heartthrob in this novel. LOL)
He smiled, "No, she's not." (smiled. Now what's this story???)
I will not shout it all over town (dialogue, 'I won't shout it all over town.' sounds more natural)
The Judge left, and Jackson ordered a double. (judge because of the 'the')
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Fixed....Your Cowboy is a smooth talker with a knock-out of a smile. What a guy! He can't help himself. LOL
You know he came to town looking for you!
Smiles, Carol
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I'm waiting for him. LOL
