Flower Power and Mine
Rain and living water revive.16 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a excellent spitirual poem. Like a fower dying without water we to will wither and die from lack of the water of life that comes from God. If we cry out to him he will always be there to meet out needs.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This is a excellent spitirual poem. Like a fower dying without water we to will wither and die from lack of the water of life that comes from God. If we cry out to him he will always be there to meet out needs.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for sharing your review and faith comments.
Comment from jessizero
This was such a lovely and moving poem! I took it at face value at the beginning, but then you introduced me to the true meaning. I was moved. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This was such a lovely and moving poem! I took it at face value at the beginning, but then you introduced me to the true meaning. I was moved. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you for a beautiful review, Jessi. May God grant you special blessings today.
Comment from patcelaw
Our lives are often like that little rosebud that has no stem to hold it wrecked. Our lives we have to have the Lord Jesus Christ to hold us up or we would all fail and like that rosebud. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Our lives are often like that little rosebud that has no stem to hold it wrecked. Our lives we have to have the Lord Jesus Christ to hold us up or we would all fail and like that rosebud. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you Patricia for your review and your words of truth about our lives.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
You've done a nice job with this poem. I liked the comparison between a dying plant waiting for a rain shower to to a person drying up spiritually and needing the Living Waters of God. Well-written.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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You've done a nice job with this poem. I liked the comparison between a dying plant waiting for a rain shower to to a person drying up spiritually and needing the Living Waters of God. Well-written.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn, for a very encouraging review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Verna,
God supplies what we need and your metaphor about dry flower and rain is perfect.
Good rhyme and meter scheme.
Gypsy
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Hello, Verna,
God supplies what we need and your metaphor about dry flower and rain is perfect.
Good rhyme and meter scheme.
Gypsy
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy, for this excellent, thoughtful review.
Comment from Sally Law
I love your poem, Verna dear. It's true, were much like the flowers in the garden and we desperately need the living water of Jesus Christ. A wonderful poem to begin my day. Sending you my best today as always and blessings abundant in our Lord Jesus Christ.
Sal Xoxo
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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I love your poem, Verna dear. It's true, were much like the flowers in the garden and we desperately need the living water of Jesus Christ. A wonderful poem to begin my day. Sending you my best today as always and blessings abundant in our Lord Jesus Christ.
Sal Xoxo
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Sal, for loving and understanding my poem. Hugs, Verna