The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm struggling with part of the ending. Sandra and Michael didn't officially end up as a couple. They will be in the same city, but I hoped for at least a commitment to date or something. Otherwise, it's great. No ideas for the other parts. I never do them well, my publisher always changes it. LOL
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I'm struggling with part of the ending. Sandra and Michael didn't officially end up as a couple. They will be in the same city, but I hoped for at least a commitment to date or something. Otherwise, it's great. No ideas for the other parts. I never do them well, my publisher always changes it. LOL
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I was afraid to make too much of a commitment with Sandra and Michael since they obviously only knew each other those few days of the standoff and then searching the cellar. I thought the fact that she decided to return to the city because of him and give up the mansion was a big commitment, but then was just my way of thinking. Thanks for sticking it out till the end and always giving me your support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congratulations! The ending of Chapter 48 beautifully captures the bond between Madeline and Esther. I love how you highlight their farewell with such sincerity and love. Esther's departure is handled with grace. You beautifully tie up loose ends in the final chapter. I like how you show us how the characters move forward with their lives while cherishing the memories of what they shared. It's a touching conclusion that resonates with warmth and hope. Good luck with your book! Keep us informed on how it goes.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Congratulations! The ending of Chapter 48 beautifully captures the bond between Madeline and Esther. I love how you highlight their farewell with such sincerity and love. Esther's departure is handled with grace. You beautifully tie up loose ends in the final chapter. I like how you show us how the characters move forward with their lives while cherishing the memories of what they shared. It's a touching conclusion that resonates with warmth and hope. Good luck with your book! Keep us informed on how it goes.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Michel. I am thrilled that you understood how the ghosts and mortals connected, like family, and worked together to solve their problems. I appreciate all your kindness and the time you took to read the book. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
This has been a unuaual an throughly enjoyable journey and I think you have don't an amazing job of juggling so man characters. I think you summation for the book jacket sounds great. I hope this does will on the market. I'm sure it will.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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This has been a unuaual an throughly enjoyable journey and I think you have don't an amazing job of juggling so man characters. I think you summation for the book jacket sounds great. I hope this does will on the market. I'm sure it will.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Beth. I've never published and truly don't even know where I begin. But I want to give it a shot. I appreciate yo sticking with me throughout the story and for all your support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was amazing!! I loved, loved, loved this story! It all came to a satisfactory ending, every one different people-ghosts than they were when the story began. My only wish was that you had more readers on here, they would have loved the story. The part where they ascended to Heaven was mind boggling, I was covered in goose pimples!! Now what am I going to do? You have to write another book, with ghosts. I do love ghosts. Lol. Well done, my dear friend. I thoroughly enjoyed your amazing story. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
I have to admit I like the title you have already, but there is a nice ring about...Echoes of Redemption... See what others think. The blurb is very well done, in future for my books, I'm going to ask you to help me write one. :)) I'm glad you are publishing this one, and you should publish the others too. Or, seeing as they haven't been published yet, try finding an agent, if one takes you on, you will be published by a main-stream publisher. That would be a feather in your cap. :)) Love you, dear friend. xxxx
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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That was amazing!! I loved, loved, loved this story! It all came to a satisfactory ending, every one different people-ghosts than they were when the story began. My only wish was that you had more readers on here, they would have loved the story. The part where they ascended to Heaven was mind boggling, I was covered in goose pimples!! Now what am I going to do? You have to write another book, with ghosts. I do love ghosts. Lol. Well done, my dear friend. I thoroughly enjoyed your amazing story. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
I have to admit I like the title you have already, but there is a nice ring about...Echoes of Redemption... See what others think. The blurb is very well done, in future for my books, I'm going to ask you to help me write one. :)) I'm glad you are publishing this one, and you should publish the others too. Or, seeing as they haven't been published yet, try finding an agent, if one takes you on, you will be published by a main-stream publisher. That would be a feather in your cap. :)) Love you, dear friend. xxxx
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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It's three o'clock in the morning here and I'm smiling of ear to ear. I couldn't wait to see what you thought of the ending and if I did the story justice. Thank you for all the encouragement you gave me and that extra push I needed to continue.
And guess what...I just posted the prologue and forgot to put it in the contest. I have to see how I get that changed if possible. Too early in the morning. Off to contact Tom.
Thank you so much for your thoughts, love and support.
Smiles and hugs, Carol