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Teri's Purr~fect Birthday

Merry~go~Rhyme for Teri 7

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Comment from Janet Foor
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Happy Birthday Teri. So happy that we can get to know you better through Debi's sweet poem and can wish you the very best of birthdays and health and happiness.

Blessings my friend
Janet

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Janet, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from Dawn Munro
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"This tribute's for a woman who we truly do adore
And even though we love her, we know Jesus loves her more..."

Don't tell me I missed my beloved friend's birthday!!!!!!! I DO think I greeted her on Facebook, but I can't remember! I should have written a poem for her too!!!!!!

"So Teri, Happy Birthday, may your day have no regrets
And hope you will have many more and nobody forgets"

Forgive me, Debi -- I am rushing off to check Teri's timeline (but your tribute is marvelous! You illustrate her huge heart, and how much family means to her. Plus that art you chose is divine!!!!)

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Dawn, what a sweet and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend. Love, Debi

    And thanks for the lovely stars too.
reply by Dawn Munro on 09-Jul-2024
    You are very welcome!
Comment from gansach
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Thank you for introducing me to a new form of poetry, Debi. I like it very much. As always you have helped the reader get to know another person through your lovely words. I wish Teri the best. Your personal poems are so uplifting. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Gayle, thank so very much. That is my Merry~go~Rhyme that I started a couple years ago. I will use it for your poem if you want. Check out the link I am sending you telling you about the birth of the MGM. It's a lot of fun.

    What a sweet and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend. Love, Debi

    Birth of the MGR.
    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Debi,
What a sweet lady you've written a poem for. Teri is such a sweetheart. I love what you've found out and are able to share with us. She's had such a full life with work, volunteering at church, raising children and grandchildren. Add to that she's a talented writer and reviewer.

Love you much,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Rhonda, what a sweet and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.
    And thanks for the lovely stars too

    I don't know if you remember the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun.
    Here is a link to it. Love ya lots. Debi

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is a lovely poem in Teri's honor. She seems to have her hands full with grandson, grand chicken, and grand dog. How does she find time to write? God bless her with a lovely birthday and many days and weeks of ease from her MS.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi there, Carol, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from Nicki.B
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I enjoyed this poem so much. First of this style that I've read and reviewed on. I'm a novice and a learner new enough to the platform so I love seeing new styles of poems I would have never even know existed. The flow and the story and the preciseness is impressive, well done a wonderful tribute poem.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Oh Nicki, how very sweet of you. The Merry~go~Rhyme is my own baby, so thank you very much for your kind words. That means a lot. You might get a kick out of seeing how and why I started it. This is the link to what is called
    "The Birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme."

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0

    Thanks again for your very kind comments, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Happy Birthday, Teri! And what a tribute here, packed full of fascinating detail, conveyed in this delightful merry-go-rhyme format and birthday- wrapped with visual and videos. Thank you, Debi, for sharing Teri's very full and commendable life with us, a pleasure to read. Take care Debbie xos

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Hi Debbie, how funny, but I just got done on your page and came back to find you here. I guess great minds do think alike. Thanks for the awesome words for Teri's poem. This one was a little more difficult. Not because of it being a MGR, but for other reasons.
    Anyway, thank you again and it is always good to see you, dear friend,
    Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you, my dear special FanStory angel, for sharing this birthday tribute for Teri with us. I have been a fan of hers for a very long time and will surely wish her a special birthday.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Thanks so much Barb. I always appreciate your kind words.
    You are so good to me and I love you for it. Debi
Comment from karenina
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Happy Birthday to Teri! HALLMARK better take notice, because you are rapidly cornering the market on birthday poems that reflect the interests and life-facts of our fellow writers.

You must have a long list of poems to write as I've noticed you're offering to work your poetic magic for anyone on site who contacts you!

Your "MGR" form is now one of your trademarks and nobody can do it like you!

Congratulations on another fine offering -- and once more, HAPPY BIRTHDAY to Teri!

Karenina

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Thanks so much, my sweet friend. I have come to love doing these more than any other poetry I do. I love the idea of making someone else smile. It has purpose and meaning in their lives and in mine. It's such a rewarding feeling and I now know that is what God wanted me to do when I told Him to let me be a blessing to others.

    However, they are very time consuming and difficult with some of the info that is given to me. To get them into meter, rhyme, make sense and in the correct stanza is very challenging. All worth it when you feel the appreciation from the birthday person.

    You know, I am surprised that I have found that the guys really seem to like them and that means a lot to me. Hmmmm, when is Ed's birthday? LOL

    Thanks for the awesome review and comments, dear K. Love, Debi
reply by karenina on 07-Jul-2024
    Smile. The people who want these poems are being gifted the most personal and loving gift you can offer.

    It doesn't surprise me that the "guys" enjoy a spotlight on them!

    Your "reward" for this effort goes way beyond any stars, and I know how personally you take the responsibility to showcase each person with the greatest skill!

    The key is that you invite people to let you know if they would like a birthday poem.

    This honors the privacy of those who may have "stage fright" or do not wish to share more than they do through their posts or comments.

    Obviously, you have a TON of "takers" and you'll be busy writing every month for a lot of members!

    I don't know how you keep up with it.
    It's because you're so devoted ...









reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Thanks K, and I have a few lined up but not anything like I had last year before everyone had one. Now I had Teri ask, and Lorraine just came to me and asked for a light hearted one for her birthday this year. Besides that I have quite a few set up for the later birthdays. But unless it is someone I am feeling really close to I will not be offering anymore. That is why I just started putting that in my notes a while ago. I think a few thought I was just going to do them again. That is why I loved that Teri asked because she had one last year. I just want others to know they are welcome but they need to ask me. Except for a few of those like you and Sally who I just will until you tell me not to. LOL
Comment from jmdg1954
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Yes Teri, please. I need someone to watch our three dogs while we are on vacation...

You did it again. Providing us with a magnificent birthday tribute, to a wonderful writer/ reviewer and as you provided us, a wonderful person.

Cheers on Sunday, Debi.

John

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    John, thanks so very much. I know Teri will enjoy reading the kind comments and the wishes that everyone is sending her way. You are too kind and I also appreciate the thoughtful words for her poem. In case I haven't said it for a while, you are the best!! Thanks again. Love, Debi