The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can see the end in sight, Carol. :)) I love the 'treasure' was about them, individually, learning to be gracious in every way. That is treasure enough to get them into Heaven. Very clever! And now we want to know what it beyond that door. Is it the stairs to Heaven? The other treasure that Sandra found, that will be the final bit of doubt moved from Esther had about William's love for her. You're doing a wonderful job rounding everything up, my friend. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I can see the end in sight, Carol. :)) I love the 'treasure' was about them, individually, learning to be gracious in every way. That is treasure enough to get them into Heaven. Very clever! And now we want to know what it beyond that door. Is it the stairs to Heaven? The other treasure that Sandra found, that will be the final bit of doubt moved from Esther had about William's love for her. You're doing a wonderful job rounding everything up, my friend. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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The next two chapters are done, and the story is complete. I will post one later this afternoon and the other tomorrow. I've been writing all night, and I truly hated to see it end. I hope you love it as much as I do. Oh, yeah, and I wrote a prologue for the next book, too! LOL, I should sleep good tonight.
Love you and can't wait to see what you think.
Smiles, hugs, and love, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
So many intricacies of tunnels and secret chambers in this mansion. I would have felt claustrophobic in the tunnels fearing being trapped. It seems they have reached their destination, the treasure, and have along the way renewed and restored relationships, and put aside jealousy and misunderstandings, and all working together in harmony is s great outcome.
Wendy
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So many intricacies of tunnels and secret chambers in this mansion. I would have felt claustrophobic in the tunnels fearing being trapped. It seems they have reached their destination, the treasure, and have along the way renewed and restored relationships, and put aside jealousy and misunderstandings, and all working together in harmony is s great outcome.
Wendy
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I wouldn't have liked to be down there under the ground in those narrow tunnels either. The mansion has been there for hundreds of years if not more and the tunnels were build and rebuilt over time. You've got two more chapters to go. One I will post this afternoon and the other one tomorrow morning. I hope you love it as much as I do.
Smiles, Carol