The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I so love this story!!
Jack and Michael responded in unison. "You're not asking!" (unison,)
Just curious why do ghosts need a rope to repel? Couldn't they just enter. Sorry a couple of paragraphs later, it was answered. LOL I was also curious about ghosts eating. Why would they need to??
Her eyes met Michael's as he rushed to her side. Trying to break the tension, Sandra laughed, "Just another adventure at the mansion." (laughed.)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I so love this story!!
Jack and Michael responded in unison. "You're not asking!" (unison,)
Just curious why do ghosts need a rope to repel? Couldn't they just enter. Sorry a couple of paragraphs later, it was answered. LOL I was also curious about ghosts eating. Why would they need to??
Her eyes met Michael's as he rushed to her side. Trying to break the tension, Sandra laughed, "Just another adventure at the mansion." (laughed.)
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Fixed! Thank you!
As for the eating, they really don't I suppose, but being total never eat in front of others, I guess my ghosts with their earthly forms needed to partake as well. lol I've got strange ghosts!!!
Thanks as always,
Carol
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But great characters for ghosts.
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thanks!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi,
I noticed that Sebastian has taken a backseat in this particular chapter. All the other chapters that I've seen, he is a prominent character.
This chapter brought out more of the women. Madeline and Sandra. You are gathering all these vivid characters for the finish. I don't think the next chapter will be the finish because there's still too much left to do.
Here I think the sound(s) of gears turning
" gears turning echoed through the room."
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Hi,
I noticed that Sebastian has taken a backseat in this particular chapter. All the other chapters that I've seen, he is a prominent character.
This chapter brought out more of the women. Madeline and Sandra. You are gathering all these vivid characters for the finish. I don't think the next chapter will be the finish because there's still too much left to do.
Here I think the sound(s) of gears turning
" gears turning echoed through the room."
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I like to keep every character involved in what's going on and especially giving the women stronger parts. As we speak, they are all in the wine cellar searching for the treasure.... which of course, won't be an easy feat. Thanks so much for the review, suggestion and support.
Smiles, Carol
PS - I did have it sounds of gears and Grammarly suggested I remove it... guess what...I just put it back. LOL
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lol. Thank you for telling me the future of this novel. I look forward to reading it.
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Thanks!
Comment from BethShelby
This is exciting. It seems they are at the end of their quest. I'm not sure why evil spirits would be guarding the treasure since it took so many clues for the not so evil spirits to find it, how would the evil spiris know where it was? I am anxious to find out what is so valuable and whether the mortals will get any of the treasure or is it all to go to those it was taken from. They too must be dead since it has been hidden so long.
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This is exciting. It seems they are at the end of their quest. I'm not sure why evil spirits would be guarding the treasure since it took so many clues for the not so evil spirits to find it, how would the evil spiris know where it was? I am anxious to find out what is so valuable and whether the mortals will get any of the treasure or is it all to go to those it was taken from. They too must be dead since it has been hidden so long.
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I believe this might have been just William rambling because of his concerns for the others and his lack of memory. Good question since for me it was about the journey and not the ending. Guess I should think about it so I can finish. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We're nearly there, Carol! This was exciting, after all this time, they are getting close. They have done so well with all the problems that kept poping up, now they should reap the reward. I can't wait to find out. Well done, my friend, this is an amazing story. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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We're nearly there, Carol! This was exciting, after all this time, they are getting close. They have done so well with all the problems that kept poping up, now they should reap the reward. I can't wait to find out. Well done, my friend, this is an amazing story. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I'm so glad you were the first to review this. It's kind of sad and almost difficult to write these final chapters. Like saying goodbye to good friends. I want them to achieve their goal but I've grown attached to all of them. Thanks for the lovely comments as always.
Smiles, Carol
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You know I love all your stories, this one I really loved, I love ghosts!! Lol xxx
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I love it too!