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Wallet

a 5-7-5

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Comment from karenina
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Let me get right in line behind you...

There's way too much month left at the end of the money.

I wonder how much worse it can get

Great 5-7-5!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Karenina
reply by karenina on 04-Jul-2024
    Most welcome!
Comment from Earl Corp
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This should have been a contest entry. It was clear, concise, and made sense. It certainly could have been a humorous 5-7-5. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Earl
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very well written 5-7-5 about your wallet. I can so relate to the change in the size of our wallets these days. Great words and imagery. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 04-Jul-2024
    😊😊😊
Comment from Wendy G
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A clever play on the word "bills" here, Bill. (Clever name, appropriate for this one, LOL). I enjoyed this thoughtfully and humorously composed 5-7-5. Very well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Wendy
Comment from nomi338
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Amen my brother. You have the gift. I cannot recall a time when truer words were uttered. When I was flush, my wallet was sometimes so fat, I feared getting robbed. now that my creditors rob me on the regular, my wallet reflects the outright robbery. I at least know who my robbers are, gas company, the electric company, the gas station, the grocery store, the drug store, etc.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thanks, nomi
Comment from Sally Law
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I understand. I'm not sure I was ever this loaded but I know it disappears awfully quick these days. A fun one in short verse poetry, my friend. Sending you my best today as always and good wishes in the contest.
Sal :))

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Sal
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Isn't English such a nightmare for English Language learners? Why would the bills we pay be the same as the bills we pay with? A fun poem and great illustration!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Helen
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Funny one Bill!

And so true with prices today.

Honestly, I have not had a wallet as pictured in a very long time and likely with ones! Today, I more often use credit cards, but the bills/charges are bigger now than a few years ago.

Mark

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Mark
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Heyyyyyy! That is very clever, indeed!! Nice play on words, and - yet again! - you found the perfect picture to complement your creation. I'm duly impressed. xo

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Rachelle