Tall Hatted Woman
oh my what an interlude34 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is all at once playful and romantic and it shows your gentlemanly side too. She straddled your thighs and you allude to the rest but left it up to my imagination and I love it when a poem does that! Thanks for the pleasurable ride. You have done with a few words what authors do with novels extraordinaire.
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This is all at once playful and romantic and it shows your gentlemanly side too. She straddled your thighs and you allude to the rest but left it up to my imagination and I love it when a poem does that! Thanks for the pleasurable ride. You have done with a few words what authors do with novels extraordinaire.
Jesse
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much my friend. This is a bit different for me, but this image of a tall hatted woman would not leave me alone. Thanks for a great review. Have a nice fourth would you? Lol
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You too!
I will relax all day.
Try and do the same, Doug.
Jesse
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Unexpected story in a poem. I wonder, and maybe this is thinking too hard, if the hat got squashed in the "interlude," since the speaker said he had to regain his composure. Then again, maybe the woman liked to leave a memento behind. I kept thinking you were going to make a joke or reference about getting off the horse one more time at the end, but maybe it was a real horse in the poem. The knight in shining armor, and all that, or at least holding a shiny quarter.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Unexpected story in a poem. I wonder, and maybe this is thinking too hard, if the hat got squashed in the "interlude," since the speaker said he had to regain his composure. Then again, maybe the woman liked to leave a memento behind. I kept thinking you were going to make a joke or reference about getting off the horse one more time at the end, but maybe it was a real horse in the poem. The knight in shining armor, and all that, or at least holding a shiny quarter.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Yes, it was a real horse.
Thank for reading my post.
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And your reply has wit, intelligence, and humor.
Or did I say that already with ?wit??
Comment from Nicki.B
Well that went to place I didn't expect! Very amusing....if randomly having unexpected fun with a mysterious hat lady person was that easy to come by I wonder what generation we would have lived in. Nice little fantasy story. I wonder whether she leaves the hat everytime! Costly I'd imagine...
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Well that went to place I didn't expect! Very amusing....if randomly having unexpected fun with a mysterious hat lady person was that easy to come by I wonder what generation we would have lived in. Nice little fantasy story. I wonder whether she leaves the hat everytime! Costly I'd imagine...
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Ha ha ha. Oh, I loved that. ?Costly, eh?? Yes I suppose so. The era could easily be argued. But he was riding a horse, ne cest pas?
N?est pas I believe is the
contraction, Not that I could swear to it. College french allowed me to negotiate quite nicely when I toured france. But, alas, the language has mostly left me. After all, I was married to a German for 23 years. Und was ich denke and sprecht is was ich war told. Lol
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I learned a little French in school too! But not enjought to negotiate my way in or out or anything haha! Have a good day!
Comment from gansach
This is a delightful little poem, a tale of a pleasant encounter enjoyed by both subjects, a very nice presentation and accompanying artwork. I liked reading it. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This is a delightful little poem, a tale of a pleasant encounter enjoyed by both subjects, a very nice presentation and accompanying artwork. I liked reading it. Nicely done!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you for seeing it so. As, this was my intention.
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I just checked out your profile. I must say you are a real human being.
For what it?s worth, I am very proud of you.
Doug
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not what I expected but it made for a very well written poem. I guess opportunity knocked and you accepted. Thank you for sharing this well written poem with us.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Not what I expected but it made for a very well written poem. I guess opportunity knocked and you accepted. Thank you for sharing this well written poem with us.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Barbara.
Happy 4th.
Comment from Erika Whittle
This wasn't what I was expecting but I enjoyed. I'm not sure who got the better deal, the man or the woman? Perhaps the man since he got to keep the hat as a souvenir. The gentlemen certainly accommodated the lady well lol
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This wasn't what I was expecting but I enjoyed. I'm not sure who got the better deal, the man or the woman? Perhaps the man since he got to keep the hat as a souvenir. The gentlemen certainly accommodated the lady well lol
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Chuckling, you are a riot.
Thank you,
Doug
Comment from estory
This was a nice, whimsical little piece, I just loved the ending where she gives away the hat, as a souvenir of this encounter. You had a nice upbeat, tongue in cheek tone here that carried us along for the ride. estory
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This was a nice, whimsical little piece, I just loved the ending where she gives away the hat, as a souvenir of this encounter. You had a nice upbeat, tongue in cheek tone here that carried us along for the ride. estory
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you. Exactly how I had hoped this to be perceived.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Doug
This is a cute poem. She was a cheap date, only a quarter. Of course you were a gentleman. So yo also received a gift you could regift to another woman.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Hi Doug
This is a cute poem. She was a cheap date, only a quarter. Of course you were a gentleman. So yo also received a gift you could regift to another woman.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day
Joan
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Joan.
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No problem, Doug.
Joan
Comment from nomi338
There have been a few occasions in my 80 plus years of life where I stumbled upon a carnal blessing or two. Those blessings turned into curses as I endlessly sought out more, only to be rebuffed time and again frustration claimed far too much of my time.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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There have been a few occasions in my 80 plus years of life where I stumbled upon a carnal blessing or two. Those blessings turned into curses as I endlessly sought out more, only to be rebuffed time and again frustration claimed far too much of my time.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Smiling, thank you, my friend.
Comment from Shanbreen
VICTORTOUCHE, this is such a quaint quirky poem. You are quite a gentleman to get off the horse and pick up the coin she had dropped. Love the transition of the story harping on the coin and ending up with the hat left behind.
Wonder if she was offering you a payment by giving you her hat? Wondering how much you would get for that at the flea market. =)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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VICTORTOUCHE, this is such a quaint quirky poem. You are quite a gentleman to get off the horse and pick up the coin she had dropped. Love the transition of the story harping on the coin and ending up with the hat left behind.
Wonder if she was offering you a payment by giving you her hat? Wondering how much you would get for that at the flea market. =)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Don?t know. Just seemed like a very nice lady and an intriguing interlude.
Thank you. Chuckle.