The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a lovely thing that Benny did for those boys, we know they'll be good people from now on. They weren't bad, and now he has given them the money to start a new life. I loved the part of the picture spooking Louie, so funny! Now we think we know where the book is, let's hope they find it soon. Another wonderful chapter, Carol, you're doing well! Have you signed up for a book in a month contest? If yes, let me know when you start it. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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That was a lovely thing that Benny did for those boys, we know they'll be good people from now on. They weren't bad, and now he has given them the money to start a new life. I loved the part of the picture spooking Louie, so funny! Now we think we know where the book is, let's hope they find it soon. Another wonderful chapter, Carol, you're doing well! Have you signed up for a book in a month contest? If yes, let me know when you start it. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the awesome review, Sandra. I can't wait till you catch tomorrow's offering. I really got wound up with it. LOL As for the contest, I hope to join, but I need to end this one first. I'm close. Thanks for all your support. I don't know what I would do without you.
Smiles, hugs, and love, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love the first part of this chapter when Benny saves the boys. It's a nice touch. The talking picture was hilarious. I can't wait to see the conclusion of this story.
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I love the first part of this chapter when Benny saves the boys. It's a nice touch. The talking picture was hilarious. I can't wait to see the conclusion of this story.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Yes, I couldn't let the poor young boys go down with the rest of the gangsters and Benny has been looking for his way for salvation...I think he found it. Thanks for enjoying.
Smiles, Carol
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Way to go, Carol.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing continues to be absolutely captivating! You do a great job of pulling me into the intense escape and the eerie supernatural twist that follows. The excellent descriptions of Terrence and Tony's struggle through the river are gripping! Great job again!
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Your writing continues to be absolutely captivating! You do a great job of pulling me into the intense escape and the eerie supernatural twist that follows. The excellent descriptions of Terrence and Tony's struggle through the river are gripping! Great job again!
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Michael, for your interest in the story and review. I enjoy knowing that my efforts draw you into the story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol