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Boss Bill's Pen-cils

a poem

12 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm not sure I understood it all but Boss Bill has a great imagination and so it's good that he knows how to wield his pen/pencil/computer to make new worlds emerge!

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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Luckily, he has an eraser.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Bill has a maniacal side that tapers off to a whimsical side when his mania subsides. All good traits for a poet. If the mania ever lasts to the end of a poem we are all in deep chit. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Marilyn. Maybe too much coffee.