Dodie Rae
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "A new day"A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.
16 total reviews
Comment from joann r romei
This was great Im going to have to read the chapter prior to this one if there was one, I like the character, keeps the reader wondering what the hell is going on!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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This was great Im going to have to read the chapter prior to this one if there was one, I like the character, keeps the reader wondering what the hell is going on!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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There are 4 so far in this novel starting with Dodie Rae. Thank you for the awesome review
God bless
Steve
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love it!! This is such a cool ride to be on. First, I'm worried about Dodi. Hoping the police won't arrest her, then when she sets her sites on Officer Not So Friendly, now I want her to be caught. This is so different from ant other stories on this site. It's pure horror. Loving it. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I love it!! This is such a cool ride to be on. First, I'm worried about Dodi. Hoping the police won't arrest her, then when she sets her sites on Officer Not So Friendly, now I want her to be caught. This is so different from ant other stories on this site. It's pure horror. Loving it. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen, for this beautiful six-star review. I'm overjoyed at the reviews it's been receiving. I work for a few hours, and then I'm off for two days.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
UHOH! Officer Not-so-friendly is in troubbbbble. lol Great chapter. congrats on your milestone post. I found one minor typo to fix.
"No!" she cried." it was something else. (quotes missing)
Keep 'rm coming!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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UHOH! Officer Not-so-friendly is in troubbbbble. lol Great chapter. congrats on your milestone post. I found one minor typo to fix.
"No!" she cried." it was something else. (quotes missing)
Keep 'rm coming!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn for this excellent review, my friend. Officer-not-so-friendly doesn't realize who he pissed off, lol.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Steve Foreman
I have been SO looking forward to this next installment - and it was really worth the wait. I love it - I wish I had written it; it is right up my street and just the type of tale I like writing. I hope you have copyrighted it!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I have been SO looking forward to this next installment - and it was really worth the wait. I love it - I wish I had written it; it is right up my street and just the type of tale I like writing. I hope you have copyrighted it!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Steve, for the wonderful six-star review my friend. Yes, I copyrighted each chapter as I go. If all goes well I plan to attempt traditional publication. I have a series on my hand and know the next three novels.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice plot progress.
"so thank you, my no longer abusive dead husband." - oops
it was something else. - oops again
Standing a few acres away. - This might be clear, but a super-critic (smiley face here) might ask whether the 'acres' were square, or rectangular, ten feet wide and four thousand feet long, wondering if the 'away' was 30-40 feet, or 2-3 miles.
"yes, I did." she thought. - oops. My Shift key fails me all the time. i'm constantly going back to capitalize words. (another smiley face here)There are a few more needing capped further on.
Officer, not so friendly." - maybe Officer-Not-So-Friendly???
I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Nice plot progress.
"so thank you, my no longer abusive dead husband." - oops
it was something else. - oops again
Standing a few acres away. - This might be clear, but a super-critic (smiley face here) might ask whether the 'acres' were square, or rectangular, ten feet wide and four thousand feet long, wondering if the 'away' was 30-40 feet, or 2-3 miles.
"yes, I did." she thought. - oops. My Shift key fails me all the time. i'm constantly going back to capitalize words. (another smiley face here)There are a few more needing capped further on.
Officer, not so friendly." - maybe Officer-Not-So-Friendly???
I enjoyed the read.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Wayne, thank you,my friend for the awesome review and catches. I love the way you put Officer-not-so-friendly. I definitely made some corrections, with the acreage as well.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from royowen
I wonder what's going to happen to Officer Riley, will she turn again, and rip him to pieces I'll bet, but how will she explain how officer Riley carked it, much like cowardly Richard, I enjoyed the acting effort of Dodie Rae, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I wonder what's going to happen to Officer Riley, will she turn again, and rip him to pieces I'll bet, but how will she explain how officer Riley carked it, much like cowardly Richard, I enjoyed the acting effort of Dodie Rae, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Roy, for this excellent review, my friend. Officer Riley is safe for now, lol.
God bless,
Steve
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That?s good
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Maybe, we will have to see what Dodie decides to do, lol. Thank you, Roy. I appreciate this excellent review.
God bless, steve
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