Venturing Deeper
Growing deeper in God's Word14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Venturing Deeper, presented with seven ABAB-rhymed quatrains, reminds the readers that the biggest fear we could have is not doing all we can to lead the world to God.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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This poem, Venturing Deeper, presented with seven ABAB-rhymed quatrains, reminds the readers that the biggest fear we could have is not doing all we can to lead the world to God.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Bill, for a review that blesses me.
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem of faith. Your metaphor of the fear of drowning in the sea vs delving deep in faith is a very good one.
if we have a strong faith in God we should not be overcome by fear.
Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem of faith. Your metaphor of the fear of drowning in the sea vs delving deep in faith is a very good one.
if we have a strong faith in God we should not be overcome by fear.
Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you Nancy for liking my metaphorical poem. I agree wholehearted with your comment about faith and appreciate your good wishes for the contest.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was so creative. Your poem beautifully captures the profound journey of faith. I love how you use swimming to illustrate the depth and richness of exploring God's Word. I really like how you share your desire to live by God's teachings and share His love with others. The writing is excellent. Each stanza flows smoothly into the next. Your closing message about living by His example and showing His love to others is a perfect conclusion.
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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I thought this was so creative. Your poem beautifully captures the profound journey of faith. I love how you use swimming to illustrate the depth and richness of exploring God's Word. I really like how you share your desire to live by God's teachings and share His love with others. The writing is excellent. Each stanza flows smoothly into the next. Your closing message about living by His example and showing His love to others is a perfect conclusion.
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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This is a wonderful review, and I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful spiritual poem that is so full of the truth. You used great descriptive and so true words. It was a blessing to read this morning. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teir
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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This is a very beautiful spiritual poem that is so full of the truth. You used great descriptive and so true words. It was a blessing to read this morning. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teir
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the review and for getting a blessing from my poem.