Dilly-Dot The Daisy
Searching for the spring.29 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
What a very lovely poem, with a delightful story-line. It would make a wonderful illustrated book for young children. Such perfect rhyme and smooth metre. A pleasure to read. Congratulations - this sounds like a winner to me!
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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What a very lovely poem, with a delightful story-line. It would make a wonderful illustrated book for young children. Such perfect rhyme and smooth metre. A pleasure to read. Congratulations - this sounds like a winner to me!
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy, for your great comments and generous review :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an epic tale full of sweet sentiments and I enjoyed the ride Shirley. I loved your flowing metre and your excellent matching rhymes, but most of all I loved your inventive and endearing story, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This is an epic tale full of sweet sentiments and I enjoyed the ride Shirley. I loved your flowing metre and your excellent matching rhymes, but most of all I loved your inventive and endearing story, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Dolly x
Comment from Boogienights
I really like how unique and different your story poem is. It's so appealing and l think kids will love the happy ending. Great characters with great personalities. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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I really like how unique and different your story poem is. It's so appealing and l think kids will love the happy ending. Great characters with great personalities. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much :)
Comment from Erika Whittle
This is really cute and reads well. I think kids would really like it.
Just this one part:
They say I'm going crazy and I think they're right, be-blowed!"
Maybe think of re-wording it? My dirty little mind went somewhere not so innocent.
It was a great poem though, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This is really cute and reads well. I think kids would really like it.
Just this one part:
They say I'm going crazy and I think they're right, be-blowed!"
Maybe think of re-wording it? My dirty little mind went somewhere not so innocent.
It was a great poem though, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Erika.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Poem For A Child contest. It's perfect for children but adults will like it too. Lovely presentation.
I was worried for the poor dilly dot daisy.... good alliteration.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Wonderful entry for the Poem For A Child contest. It's perfect for children but adults will like it too. Lovely presentation.
I was worried for the poor dilly dot daisy.... good alliteration.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much :)
Comment from QC Poet
Glad this little Dilly Daisy finally met up with her family of daisies with their leaves out-stretched to greet her this is a good poem and children's imagination stirring poetry Thanks for Sharing it with is not quite grown up kids and Older ones
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Glad this little Dilly Daisy finally met up with her family of daisies with their leaves out-stretched to greet her this is a good poem and children's imagination stirring poetry Thanks for Sharing it with is not quite grown up kids and Older ones
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very cute poem. I like how Dilly-Daisy finds some help. Too often in life when we need help we can't find any. I always try to help, but often don't get any in return. Cute picture, and very appropriate to the poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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This was a very cute poem. I like how Dilly-Daisy finds some help. Too often in life when we need help we can't find any. I always try to help, but often don't get any in return. Cute picture, and very appropriate to the poem. Great job!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Monica.
Comment from Teri7
Shirley, This is a very well written poem about the little daisy looking for spring and finally finding it. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words and the artwork. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Shirley, This is a very well written poem about the little daisy looking for spring and finally finding it. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words and the artwork. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Teri.
Comment from Begin Again
How refreshing for this world that's often upside down. I can see little ones getting engrossed in the thought of the characters interacting as they follow their adventure and find Spring. Ending on a note of joyful happiness is awesome!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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How refreshing for this world that's often upside down. I can see little ones getting engrossed in the thought of the characters interacting as they follow their adventure and find Spring. Ending on a note of joyful happiness is awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Carol.
Comment from royowen
I think that this is a masterfully written kiddies poem, superbly written, beautifully paced, articulate and a wonderfully rhymed, it would match anything I've ever read as a writer and a reviewer of poetry that I've ever read, and that's a lot, well done, great writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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I think that this is a masterfully written kiddies poem, superbly written, beautifully paced, articulate and a wonderfully rhymed, it would match anything I've ever read as a writer and a reviewer of poetry that I've ever read, and that's a lot, well done, great writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy, for your very generous comments.
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Most welcome