Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I hate to see this story end. I think you are an awesome writer and I've enjoyed everything you've posted. I know your last chapter will be good and you will be getting back to the other story. I didn't read it from the beginning but I have it and feel like I know what is going on.
Beth

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024

Thank you, Beth. I'm happy you joined in on this. It's honestly hard to end this but it's time. Thank you for the endless support and the valuable feedback.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

I can't wait for the final chapter. I'm glad Heddy's family sees Artie as good. I hope they continue to. I'm glad Nancy got what she deserves. This is a good write.

Willis smiles. "I should be saluting you, miss Heddy." (not sure, but Miss Heddy)

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024

Thank you, Barbara. This review and rating have made my Sunday. Gretchen

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Well, well. Not the end of the world for Artie after all.
"i won't ever forget you, - oops
Very realistic dialogue. Good work. And good ;luck with the story.


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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024

Thank you, Wayne. I appreciate you're review and the continued support. Gretchen

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am so glad that Artie survived and that he was taken care of by Heddy's family. And Lester's Aunt is carted off to a mental institution! Serves her right. I enjoyed this wonderful chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024

Thanks, Dolly. I thought the straight jacket was fitting. Lil. I really appreciate this. Gretchen