Joys of Being Raised With Boys
A Quatern12 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I really like this quatern a lot.
An excellent refrain threaded throughout the poem.
You chose great examples showing how being raised with boys helped her to grow up "sweet as mom, strong as dad."
I'm not sure "fact" rhymes with "bat," but otherwise your rhymes are well-chosen. Rod
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I really like this quatern a lot.
An excellent refrain threaded throughout the poem.
You chose great examples showing how being raised with boys helped her to grow up "sweet as mom, strong as dad."
I'm not sure "fact" rhymes with "bat," but otherwise your rhymes are well-chosen. Rod
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from royowen
My sister was raised with four male brothers, and she turned out pretty tough, you've written a very good quatern, you don't see a lot of these poems with repetitive, beautifully written great rhyming, flow and language, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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My sister was raised with four male brothers, and she turned out pretty tough, you've written a very good quatern, you don't see a lot of these poems with repetitive, beautifully written great rhyming, flow and language, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much.