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Comment from poetwatch
This is very good, Gypsy. :) A free verse love poem that's what I call it. You danced with the words because you are a river of loveliness. The sun and the moon are your companions and your words capture your love. I like the picture also. :) Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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This is very good, Gypsy. :) A free verse love poem that's what I call it. You danced with the words because you are a river of loveliness. The sun and the moon are your companions and your words capture your love. I like the picture also. :) Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Where are you getting these handsome men from, Gypsy! A beautiful piece of writing with your imagery of the sea. But my favourite is the last stanza with that magic word of 'wounded' added to your alliterative line and infusing a delicate touch of poignancy. Well done! Debbie
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Where are you getting these handsome men from, Gypsy! A beautiful piece of writing with your imagery of the sea. But my favourite is the last stanza with that magic word of 'wounded' added to your alliterative line and infusing a delicate touch of poignancy. Well done! Debbie
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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LoL I find all my men on Pinterest. Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
You never who loved you more, but of course it was revealed in those two simple words, I Am. Before Abraham was I Am, John 8:58. This is beautifully written Gypsy, most lyrical, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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You never who loved you more, but of course it was revealed in those two simple words, I Am. Before Abraham was I Am, John 8:58. This is beautifully written Gypsy, most lyrical, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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