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Comment from zaraduck6
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I loved reading this poem! It was truly brilliantly written, with nice images to cap it off. What a wonderful word choice and structure. The literary devices fit perfectly. Well done!

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Zara

    Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is so rich in detail that this reader can't help but fall in love with this man, even disregarding the visual! I really enjoyed how you introduced that background nobility, providing an additional layer to an already compellingly beautiful man!! Well done Debbie

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie

    Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a pair written Japanese poem that you have presented us today and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the very best for the rest of the week. Patricia

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, patricia

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes, I was testifying to whom I want to be like, it was Christ, am I like Hom, not much, nobody is really like Him, but He's the model. Beautifully written Gypsy, bless you, blessings Roy
Suggestion, (Find a purest love) find a purer love.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I corrected it. Thanks!

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 12-Jun-2024
    Most welcome, well earned
Comment from nancyjam
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I love this beautiful poem about Christ. Very descriptive images, especially in the last verse.
An interesting poetic form. You made good use of it here.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Nancy

    Gypsy