Changing the outcome
It's never too late..16 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, if only we could go back even a few minutes and change the outcome of so many things, especially of accidents etc. more than a basketball game. But you gave a fine example and told it well in just 50 words! Best wishes in the contest!
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Ah, if only we could go back even a few minutes and change the outcome of so many things, especially of accidents etc. more than a basketball game. But you gave a fine example and told it well in just 50 words! Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment from jessizero
This was a lovely piece of short fantasy. I really enjoyed it, and I liked the picture you supplied, as well. I think we've all wanted to re-do something at some point or another. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was a lovely piece of short fantasy. I really enjoyed it, and I liked the picture you supplied, as well. I think we've all wanted to re-do something at some point or another. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written Dribble Flash Fiction story you have penned for the contest. I love happy endings and this was surely one. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written Dribble Flash Fiction story you have penned for the contest. I love happy endings and this was surely one. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment from Sarah Probe 1
Very positive, encouraging words full of purpose and determination, thank you for a captivating motivating play of verses. Awesome poem !) thanks a lot
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Very positive, encouraging words full of purpose and determination, thank you for a captivating motivating play of verses. Awesome poem !) thanks a lot
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Comment from Neonewman
This was a fun, fast read. I love a great turnout. Magic would be nice to get my hands on at the casino, lol. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless,
Steve
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This was a fun, fast read. I love a great turnout. Magic would be nice to get my hands on at the casino, lol. Thank you for sharing your talent.
God bless,
Steve
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Nicole
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
If only we could all have a magic wand that we could wave and go back in time and get the outcome that we want
Who wouldn't want that? I can't tell which game you're playing, but if it's a court, it has to be basketball I think.
I guess gymnasts use courts as well. But this was a team sport so I think it is basketball. She was dribbling down the court. Basketball for sure
I guess in a dream.world you can have magical things happen. Would be so nice.
I enjoyed reading your poem. You can be proud of it.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Hi, Nicole
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
If only we could all have a magic wand that we could wave and go back in time and get the outcome that we want
Who wouldn't want that? I can't tell which game you're playing, but if it's a court, it has to be basketball I think.
I guess gymnasts use courts as well. But this was a team sport so I think it is basketball. She was dribbling down the court. Basketball for sure
I guess in a dream.world you can have magical things happen. Would be so nice.
I enjoyed reading your poem. You can be proud of it.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
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