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Comment from GWHARGIS
This made me think of the song by the police. Every breath you take. That song has strong stalker vibes. Its true that stalkers often get a fantasy life with their victims in their heads that is almost unbreakable. This was beautiful until you realize this is about a stalker. Thank ou for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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This made me think of the song by the police. Every breath you take. That song has strong stalker vibes. Its true that stalkers often get a fantasy life with their victims in their heads that is almost unbreakable. This was beautiful until you realize this is about a stalker. Thank ou for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I know that stalklng is the result of an obsessive mind. I also know that stalkers are some of the most focused individuals you would encounter. Your poem touched on that, as being the focus on a person. It was real, and clear.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I know that stalklng is the result of an obsessive mind. I also know that stalkers are some of the most focused individuals you would encounter. Your poem touched on that, as being the focus on a person. It was real, and clear.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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RJ
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well, this is a little off-the-wall L O L but well done. Gypsy, I don't know if you want us to cheer for a hook up or be thankful that one being stalked has been able to avoid unwanted advance. You have spoken of unrequited love that permeates much of society. Good job.
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Well, this is a little off-the-wall L O L but well done. Gypsy, I don't know if you want us to cheer for a hook up or be thankful that one being stalked has been able to avoid unwanted advance. You have spoken of unrequited love that permeates much of society. Good job.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You are most welcome Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
lol. great stalker poem - felt pretty real lol
shinning in the sun <-- one N in shining
great fun imagery
and smooth flow
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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lol. great stalker poem - felt pretty real lol
shinning in the sun <-- one N in shining
great fun imagery
and smooth flow
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Shelley. I fixed it.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy