Comment from zaraduck6

Excellent

I loved this poem! It was clear and understandable, with an easy font to read. The imagery fits perfectly with the poem and so does the pink backdrop. I loved the rhyme scheme, and the syllable count was on point. Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Tank you very much, Z

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi, Bill

It sounds like you are saying muscle and brawn Are the most important assets someone can have

Where does that put women? Does it make them inferior? I guess women can have stealth and steady nerves as well as any man.

Nicely rhymed. Perfect meter. A fine effort by you

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Thank you, Pam. I have made no distinctions between men and women.

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Overall this is a great work. This type of poem can be difficult to write. I liked the graphic and presentation used here as well. Best of luck overall

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Thanks, Nicole