Endgame
25 syllable poem13 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I always laugh bitterly when I see all the New Year's Day celebrations and all the hopes for peace among men. Yet wars are going on all around us. We won't have peace until they end.
How? Don't know. But believing in the Lord is a good start. Wars are generally gotten into by politicians. Do they send their sons and daughters to die? Hell no That is probably what it would take to end war is for the wealthy to lose their children.
Countries. Boundaries that are in space and that should not exist. Once everything is just one big world, and there are no countries peace will linger.
Future wars will be about water rights. There will be many places on earth that don't have water because of global warming. Global warming itself is also caused by politicians lying to their constituents
Eliminate politicians and you'll probably eliminate war
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I always laugh bitterly when I see all the New Year's Day celebrations and all the hopes for peace among men. Yet wars are going on all around us. We won't have peace until they end.
How? Don't know. But believing in the Lord is a good start. Wars are generally gotten into by politicians. Do they send their sons and daughters to die? Hell no That is probably what it would take to end war is for the wealthy to lose their children.
Countries. Boundaries that are in space and that should not exist. Once everything is just one big world, and there are no countries peace will linger.
Future wars will be about water rights. There will be many places on earth that don't have water because of global warming. Global warming itself is also caused by politicians lying to their constituents
Eliminate politicians and you'll probably eliminate war
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from EeanBlack
I counted 25. I love the subject and art. Well, we've tried love. The strongest emotion I know hasn't worked. It will probably take the end of our existence to teach us, but by then you know it's too late.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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I counted 25. I love the subject and art. Well, we've tried love. The strongest emotion I know hasn't worked. It will probably take the end of our existence to teach us, but by then you know it's too late.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Great review & thanks again for those 6 twinkling stars zanya
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I love this as a whole. The graphic goes along nicely too. Great work in a poem that only allows so many words to be used! These can be difficult for sure.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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I love this as a whole. The graphic goes along nicely too. Great work in a poem that only allows so many words to be used! These can be difficult for sure.
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Great review zanya