The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Ulla
This is a great chapter, Carol. I can feel the tension and the urgency. But they are all working together which is great news
This is such a wonderful story, and I'm looking forward to the next part. A big hug, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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This is a great chapter, Carol. I can feel the tension and the urgency. But they are all working together which is great news
This is such a wonderful story, and I'm looking forward to the next part. A big hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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thanks, Ulla. I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story. It means so much to me. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I see you have already posted the next chapter. I can't wait to read it. I like the idea of everybody working together. You've done an excellent job writing this. I really like the story. I'm ready for the ballroom.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I see you have already posted the next chapter. I can't wait to read it. I like the idea of everybody working together. You've done an excellent job writing this. I really like the story. I'm ready for the ballroom.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Good morning, Barbara
As always I am eager to hear what you thought of each chapter. I am thrilled that yu enjoyed this on and are looking forward to the next. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, this may very well be there only chance, but I'm sure if they'll consult with Carol she might write another chance or two into the mix for good measure. HEE HEE. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Well, this may very well be there only chance, but I'm sure if they'll consult with Carol she might write another chance or two into the mix for good measure. HEE HEE. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I can't wait to see what you think of their chance... I hope I did them and the demons justice. The battle is on! Thanks for making me smile and for gracing me with and extra star! I am honored.... It's a tough story to write for me, but I'm glad that some are enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm sure this is a very hard story to write, but you're doing it so well. Now ramping it up with your fantastic details.
Hugs, Ric
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Aww! Thanks! You always say the right things to brighten my day.
Comment from royowen
There's always an enemy lurking in the darkness, as cunning as can be, fully knowing the weaknesses and foibles of mankind, and I guess that's where faith comes in, it's letting go, and persevering, and being a conduit, and that's why Sebastian is there, it gives a chance of equaling the odds, well done Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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There's always an enemy lurking in the darkness, as cunning as can be, fully knowing the weaknesses and foibles of mankind, and I guess that's where faith comes in, it's letting go, and persevering, and being a conduit, and that's why Sebastian is there, it gives a chance of equaling the odds, well done Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I can't imagine them going forward without the safety net that Sebastian provides for them. Thanks for the kind words, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
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I agree
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Sandra instinctively moved closer to Madeline and wrapped her arm around her trembling shoulders. "You need my help, and I'm willing to stay, but neither Madeline nor I should be treated like outsiders. Either we do this together, or you can do it alone."
Benny's darkened form slowly changed to a softer glimmer as he rose from his chair. "I'm out of the habit of apologizing. I overstepped and shouldn't have said what I did."
Great imagery and suspense always
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Sandra instinctively moved closer to Madeline and wrapped her arm around her trembling shoulders. "You need my help, and I'm willing to stay, but neither Madeline nor I should be treated like outsiders. Either we do this together, or you can do it alone."
Benny's darkened form slowly changed to a softer glimmer as he rose from his chair. "I'm out of the habit of apologizing. I overstepped and shouldn't have said what I did."
Great imagery and suspense always
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for continuing to follow this story. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Everyone one is working togetherr and the only enemy are the demons who are already lost with nothing to loseeeeeee so I seems they have a plan. I'm anxious to see how it may work.
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Everyone one is working togetherr and the only enemy are the demons who are already lost with nothing to loseeeeeee so I seems they have a plan. I'm anxious to see how it may work.
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I am too! I hope they can get in and get out before the demons cause some serious harm. Glad you are enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol