True Faithfulness
There is no faithfulness like God's.15 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Verna,
I don't remember reviewing your work before, but I was very impressed with you sincerity and skill.
You so aptly described situations where there was faith, until it disappeared. Only God is forever faithful, and you message rang out from your words.
Take care, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Hi Verna,
I don't remember reviewing your work before, but I was very impressed with you sincerity and skill.
You so aptly described situations where there was faith, until it disappeared. Only God is forever faithful, and you message rang out from your words.
Take care, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for a very affirming review, Rhonda. I'm not sure I've run into you before either, but I've put lots of things on here. Thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Faithful is the lamp that shines
To bring from shadows, light,
And makes it possible to see
Within the darkest night . . .
Until the power fails.
Faithful is the dearest friend,
Who shares your joys and sorrows,
Who knows the secrets of your past,
Your hopes for your tomorrows . . .
Until he loves no more.
Very nice imagery. Way to bring this to life
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Faithful is the lamp that shines
To bring from shadows, light,
And makes it possible to see
Within the darkest night . . .
Until the power fails.
Faithful is the dearest friend,
Who shares your joys and sorrows,
Who knows the secrets of your past,
Your hopes for your tomorrows . . .
Until he loves no more.
Very nice imagery. Way to bring this to life
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for an excellent review. I'm glad you liked my imagery.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Superb, Verna, and composed with such thought and inspiration, guiding the reader through each stanza to your compelling conclusion of the constancy of faithfulness in God. A strong contender and I wish you luck! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Superb, Verna, and composed with such thought and inspiration, guiding the reader through each stanza to your compelling conclusion of the constancy of faithfulness in God. A strong contender and I wish you luck! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for a great review and for your contest wishes! Have a great weekend!
Comment from zaraduck6
I love this poem! I love how the first four stanzas have a consistent rhyme scheme with a final line that's different from the rest. And the literary devices were fabulous. Well done!
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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I love this poem! I love how the first four stanzas have a consistent rhyme scheme with a final line that's different from the rest. And the literary devices were fabulous. Well done!
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for a wonderfully affirming review. You made my day!
Comment from patcelaw
This is such a lovely poem for the faith poetry contest. It reads very well when it's read aloud and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very good weekend. One little typo that I discovered was in the last stanza, I think you meant to say and if we put our trust in him . Other than that is absolutely beautiful Patricia .
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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This is such a lovely poem for the faith poetry contest. It reads very well when it's read aloud and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very good weekend. One little typo that I discovered was in the last stanza, I think you meant to say and if we put our trust in him . Other than that is absolutely beautiful Patricia .
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your affirming, excellent review. I appreciate the mistake you found, saw the error in formatting above, and fixed it , too. Have a good week-end- and a Happy Birthday!