Double Booking
We were both surprised.15 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You must have really been intent on downing those Johnny Walkers if you didn't hear anyone in the bathroom, lol!
You know what's even crazier than a naked blonde in your room? Your travel schedule! I'm tired just looking at it!!
This is exactly the kind of story the committee is looking for and is well written except for one thing - "she screamed" doesn't need to have quotes.
Good luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
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You must have really been intent on downing those Johnny Walkers if you didn't hear anyone in the bathroom, lol!
You know what's even crazier than a naked blonde in your room? Your travel schedule! I'm tired just looking at it!!
This is exactly the kind of story the committee is looking for and is well written except for one thing - "she screamed" doesn't need to have quotes.
Good luck in the contest.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
Comment from knowledge
I'd give you six stars but ran out. What a great photo. Wish I'd been there. Very descriptive. Great lead into your main plot. You are one busy couple. You need one of those new flying cars.
Thank you, Knowledge.
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I'd give you six stars but ran out. What a great photo. Wish I'd been there. Very descriptive. Great lead into your main plot. You are one busy couple. You need one of those new flying cars.
Thank you, Knowledge.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written true flash for the contest and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it's read aloud it is also in a very interesting story. Patricia .
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This is a very well written true flash for the contest and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it's read aloud it is also in a very interesting story. Patricia .
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Thesis
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
That's interesting. My daughter is a flight attendant. She's seen just about everything and she can tell us stories about angry passengers.
At least all your expenses were comped so maybe it was worth hearing that maniacal screaming. Then again maybe it wasn't would've been pretty frightening.
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi, Thesis
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
That's interesting. My daughter is a flight attendant. She's seen just about everything and she can tell us stories about angry passengers.
At least all your expenses were comped so maybe it was worth hearing that maniacal screaming. Then again maybe it wasn't would've been pretty frightening.
I enjoyed reading your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
Comment from Ricky1024
Interesting and incredible experience.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
But why all thr booze?
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Interesting and incredible experience.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
But why all thr booze?
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
