Now That Is a Great Adventure
God's care through all life's adventures.17 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Ouch, Verna you aren't going to believe this, but I am between appointments where I took a terrible fall on Friday, broke open where I had one of my knees replaced and also waiting for X-rays for cracked ribs. Then I have appt for labs and petscan to check kidneys for dialysis. They've been watching them for six months since I'm borderline. So what a time for me to run into your lovely poem. I felt like you wrote it for me. Haha. Lovely my friend. They are calling me.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Ouch, Verna you aren't going to believe this, but I am between appointments where I took a terrible fall on Friday, broke open where I had one of my knees replaced and also waiting for X-rays for cracked ribs. Then I have appt for labs and petscan to check kidneys for dialysis. They've been watching them for six months since I'm borderline. So what a time for me to run into your lovely poem. I felt like you wrote it for me. Haha. Lovely my friend. They are calling me.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your sweet review. I am so sorry that you fell! That hurts me. I'm glad my poem brought a blessing. I pray your kidneys are not worse. I'll add you to my regular prayer list--with love! Verna
Comment from Esther Brown
Amen. Up and down through all the trials of life God is there. I like the way you write: It flows gently and refreshes my soul. Yes, God is good. Esther
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Amen. Up and down through all the trials of life God is there. I like the way you write: It flows gently and refreshes my soul. Yes, God is good. Esther
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your lovely review. I'll smile for the rest of the day that you like the way I write! I'm so thankful for God's faithfulness.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
And what is getting married,
But bumping and bruising
And falling down
And getting up again together,
Yet knowing every day
That the God
Of all the universe
Is watching over you both?
Great work
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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And what is getting married,
But bumping and bruising
And falling down
And getting up again together,
Yet knowing every day
That the God
Of all the universe
Is watching over you both?
Great work
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Nicole for your review and wonderful compliment!
Comment from Bill Schott
Now this is a great poem that reminds the readers that life is falling down and getting up again. When we know that the God of the universe watches over us, the great adventure is realized.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Now this is a great poem that reminds the readers that life is falling down and getting up again. When we know that the God of the universe watches over us, the great adventure is realized.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Bill, for a great review. I find I need Him more and more as my adventure goes on.
Comment from Teri7
This is such a great poem filled with so much truth. We are blessed that God loves His children so much he is right here with us every step of the way. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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This is such a great poem filled with so much truth. We are blessed that God loves His children so much he is right here with us every step of the way. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Teri, for such a thoughtful review. Like you, I'm so glad He is with us every step of the way. Love and blessings right back to you! Verna
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely poem, reflecting on the cycle of life. It is exactly as you have described it in this well written poem I enjoyed reading it and listening to it at the same time. I wish you the very best with all of your writing may you have a wonderful day. God bless. Patricia .
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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This is a lovely poem, reflecting on the cycle of life. It is exactly as you have described it in this well written poem I enjoyed reading it and listening to it at the same time. I wish you the very best with all of your writing may you have a wonderful day. God bless. Patricia .
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia for enjoying my poem. God's blessing coming right back to you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice free verse about faith in God and life's adventure. I like the repeating stanza reaffirming the idea. Well done, I wish you the best of luck.
gypsy
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Nice free verse about faith in God and life's adventure. I like the repeating stanza reaffirming the idea. Well done, I wish you the best of luck.
gypsy
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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I appreciate your lovely review, Gypsy. Verna