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Frozen in Time (A short story)

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Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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But the weather, let me tell you, it's that bloody cold the cat's can't "meow" and the walking dead don't leave their graves.

Wow! Wonderful imagery. Kee p up rhe great work

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Did you know prose could be... a practice of setting words to the jubilatio of the alleluia. Oh my! It has something to do with music as well as paragraphing words sans poetry and verse. I was confused as you spoke twice this week about returning to practice prose.

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    I thought practicing was good, nothing confusing about it.
    Thanks, Tom, as always very much appreciated****kahpot