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Comment from royowen
I think that's the way mistrust and faith's destroyed, firstly by parents, lovers or friends, but when one understands where to put their trust, I think that's the beginning of wisdom, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Typo : Trapped in (dreed) and fear. Dread?
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I think that's the way mistrust and faith's destroyed, firstly by parents, lovers or friends, but when one understands where to put their trust, I think that's the beginning of wisdom, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Yes, God loves us all the time. Thank you very much, Roy. Thank you for catching that error.
Gypsy
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Well done
Comment from RJ Heritage
Your words in this poem have a personal tone to them. Maya Angelou to whom you have dedicated this work, is one of my favorite writers.
She has inspired me in many ways.
This is a very deep and heartfelt poem and the bkack and dark tones emphasize the mood.
I always breathe a breath of fresh air when her words of 'I rise' rescues me.
Well done.
RJ
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Your words in this poem have a personal tone to them. Maya Angelou to whom you have dedicated this work, is one of my favorite writers.
She has inspired me in many ways.
This is a very deep and heartfelt poem and the bkack and dark tones emphasize the mood.
I always breathe a breath of fresh air when her words of 'I rise' rescues me.
Well done.
RJ
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Yes, I love Maya. Her poems and the way she was.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
I've never read much of her poetry. But what I did read was very stirring. The dark place could have been physical or emotional. I saw a person watching, giving herself the tiniest bit of freedom to live outside of herself briefly. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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I've never read much of her poetry. But what I did read was very stirring. The dark place could have been physical or emotional. I saw a person watching, giving herself the tiniest bit of freedom to live outside of herself briefly. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
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