Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The Eye of the Storm"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from royowen
I agree with Heddy, however, it is still wrong, and she needs to feel the guilt, and God can deal with that. But I must admit Mrs Collette needs a heart curette heh heh. The cleanup after a hurricane must be horrific. Beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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I agree with Heddy, however, it is still wrong, and she needs to feel the guilt, and God can deal with that. But I must admit Mrs Collette needs a heart curette heh heh. The cleanup after a hurricane must be horrific. Beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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The good thing about a small community is neighbors help neighbors. Cleanup can be stressful. But usually the days following a hurricane are absolutely beautiful. Gretchen
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I agree
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Heddy is as strong-minded and genuine as ever. And the whole scene is a poignant, insular one created by the harsh weather outside and focusing on the emotions of the people within as they try to digest and deal with the sad news. Beautifully written as ever, Gretchen. Thanks for sharing Debbie
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reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Heddy is as strong-minded and genuine as ever. And the whole scene is a poignant, insular one created by the harsh weather outside and focusing on the emotions of the people within as they try to digest and deal with the sad news. Beautifully written as ever, Gretchen. Thanks for sharing Debbie
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Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. I'm thrilled you are still enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I agree an honest heart is a good thing to pray about. I really like this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. The characters come to life and are real. I like that.
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reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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I agree an honest heart is a good thing to pray about. I really like this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. The characters come to life and are real. I like that.
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Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I feel like they are real too. Gretchen
