The Fix
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Fix - Chapter Ten"A mother fights to prove her son's innocence
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I was beginning to think you'd abandoned your story, Jacob, but pleased to see you back because this subject has got great potential and you keep us guessing. Stacey is being incredibly cautious but I can sense her excitement from her spinning. But what's going on in the garden? Is the true culprit out there? Small edit: Leave (it) with me (delete 'if').
Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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I was beginning to think you'd abandoned your story, Jacob, but pleased to see you back because this subject has got great potential and you keep us guessing. Stacey is being incredibly cautious but I can sense her excitement from her spinning. But what's going on in the garden? Is the true culprit out there? Small edit: Leave (it) with me (delete 'if').
Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you Debbie. I have been working on it in the background, but I've also been editing my last book as well which has been taking up a lot of time.