Stopped in its tracks
Questrain is a quatrain that ends with a question16 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Either you are braver than I in accepting the Questrain challenge or I am too lazy to give it a try therefore I opted to potter around in a golf cart instead.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Either you are braver than I in accepting the Questrain challenge or I am too lazy to give it a try therefore I opted to potter around in a golf cart instead.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Tom, far better to potter around the the golf club with a hot putter.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a nice poem about taking a ride in the ocean and coming to the end and facing the end of life good images chosen, good word flows and thematic concerns
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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a nice poem about taking a ride in the ocean and coming to the end and facing the end of life good images chosen, good word flows and thematic concerns
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hi Jake! Thanks for your eyes!
Comment from shelley kaye
to potter... gotta remember that - so me lol!
a great questrain!
the questions sum up the prior three lines perfectly
all the stanzas connect well and flow smoothly into the next
nice imagistic word choices, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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to potter... gotta remember that - so me lol!
a great questrain!
the questions sum up the prior three lines perfectly
all the stanzas connect well and flow smoothly into the next
nice imagistic word choices, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Sheeley, tahnk you for al you are doing for FS
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, JLR.
Ahhh the mystery. Is she a mermaid? I think maybe not. Maybe she is just simply the daughter of Neptune. But I also thought that Neptune's daughter could be a mermaid
I liked the rhyming scheme with the near rhyme of stiffly and drizzly. A delight to read
Great job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Hi, JLR.
Ahhh the mystery. Is she a mermaid? I think maybe not. Maybe she is just simply the daughter of Neptune. But I also thought that Neptune's daughter could be a mermaid
I liked the rhyming scheme with the near rhyme of stiffly and drizzly. A delight to read
Great job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written poem and I stacked quatrain format and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Patricia .
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reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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This is a very nicely written poem and I stacked quatrain format and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Patricia .
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Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This questrain suite, Stopped in Its Tracks, has the proper formatting and stretches the rhymes to meet the task. Well, one wonders: Were the boaters nifty?
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reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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This questrain suite, Stopped in Its Tracks, has the proper formatting and stretches the rhymes to meet the task. Well, one wonders: Were the boaters nifty?
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Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you, sir!