Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "News From the Pacific"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a touching and well delivered story of painful loss and grief and you handled it perfectly with your well chosen words Gretchen. I have no idea why Mrs Collete would hide such news from Lester, it is a terrible thing to do and she is not a nice person. Another fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This is a touching and well delivered story of painful loss and grief and you handled it perfectly with your well chosen words Gretchen. I have no idea why Mrs Collete would hide such news from Lester, it is a terrible thing to do and she is not a nice person. Another fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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No, his aunt is definitely not a nice person. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Oh poor Lester. Not only the grief of losing his father but the double whammy of her keeping the news from him. I wonder how long she would have kept the secret from him?!!! Just as well he has Heddy and her family to care for and support him.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Oh poor Lester. Not only the grief of losing his father but the double whammy of her keeping the news from him. I wonder how long she would have kept the secret from him?!!! Just as well he has Heddy and her family to care for and support him.
Wendy
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Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I believe she would have waited to tell him at the worst possible moment. I appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reading this, although I haven't read from the start. You use excellent sensory descriptions coupled with authentic dialogue. I will go back to read from the beginning if I'm understanding it well. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I enjoyed reading this, although I haven't read from the start. You use excellent sensory descriptions coupled with authentic dialogue. I will go back to read from the beginning if I'm understanding it well. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you, Alex, for both the wonderful review and the six. Your feedback was very valuable to me. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice plot point. Nicely written.
Your dialogue and relationship action was very natural, believable.
Heddy, while given to adult thinking, still holds tightly to her youth.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Nice plot point. Nicely written.
Your dialogue and relationship action was very natural, believable.
Heddy, while given to adult thinking, still holds tightly to her youth.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you, Wayne. I really appreciate your comments. Gretchen
