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From Jay with Love

A freebie from Jay Squires

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Comment from Carol Clark2
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The premise of this therapy group is hysterical! This is a fun way to announce publication of Jay's book. I think he will be happy to provide the Snickerdoodles after such a nice plug for his book. Have a blessed week.
Carol

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    Carol, yes it was a fun way to give Jay a plug. LOL. Terry.
Comment from Thesis
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A quite humorous post. I like how you incorporated Fanstorians
who have a Jay Squires addiction. Of course, adding a little banter in the story never hurts. It was also a good way to slide in a plug for a link to the first chapter of Jay's new book.

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    Thanks for reading. I did enjoy giving Jay a plug. Terry.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Thank you for giving us an update on what Jay is doing (over at Medium) and his latest book. He had many fans here on FanStory, and providing you with a free link was a great idea. I thought of Jay when I read Debbi D'Arcy's poem on Sojourner Truth. If you recall, Jay wrote an extensive script about her decedents. I still recall the haunting ending. Thanks for sharing this information..

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    Lorriane, thanks for reading. And who can forget Jay's script about Fanny? Terry.
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Terry, your story is very good, very cute. I'm sure that Jay will get a good bit of publicity from your writing. Cute photo. Who cares about hair anyway? Grass doesn't grow on a busy street. Thanks for the link.
Margaret

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    LOL, so that's what happened to my hair! Thanks for reading, Margaret. Terry.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ha, ha, ha you are funny, and not so much of direct fan:) just one in disguise advertising for old Jay , friend:) thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    Iza, thank you for reading and your review. It was a fun "Plug" for Jay. Terry.
Comment from GoWiSt
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"gathered in the basement of a Presbyterian church," More believable if it's a Lutheran or Episcopalean basillica, as everyone knows Presbyterians went extinct in the '20s and don't exist anymore. True history; look it up on WikiLeaks.
"That would be like bringing a bottle of Jack Daniels to an AA meeting." And what's--burp!--wrong with that--burp!?
" Jay, you're going to have to provide the Snickerdoodle cookies." Ah, you ingrates--never! The costs of those are outrageous--25 whole cents for a pack...of 20.
Ah, ladis man, Jay--he's the best (or the worst--your choice).

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    LOL! Thanks for the very fun review! Terry.
Comment from royowen
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That's the first book I read of Jay's, the beginning and the middle were great, but the ending was a struggle for Jay, as it would've been for anyone. An impressive collection of writing fans you've got there, well dine, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Roy, thanks for reading. Terry.
reply by royowen on 21-May-2024
    Welcome
Comment from Sharon Elwell
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This clever piece is only one comma away from perfection, in my opinion. "...my fans, especially the lady fans, ..." is the only note I can actually provide. I've got to go use that link and look up Jay Squires' work!

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Sharon, thank you very much for the edit, and for reading. Terry.
Comment from Tina Crute
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This is hilarious. What a super clever way to drop a link to a friend's new writing. Even if it was fiction, it would be just as engaging and creative. Excuse me if I step out of the meeting...gotta go check out that link now...

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Tina, LOL, thanks for reading. Terry.
reply by Tina Crute on 21-May-2024
    Welcome!
Comment from karenina
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I'm also a Jay Squires addict (you need to publicize these meetings more!)--
I'm sorry he's no longer on FS but have it on great authority (YOU) that he's having MUCH success on another forum (Okay, you twisted my arm, it's MEDIUM)

--And of course, having great success with publishing his work!

Thanks for the link! Please extend my best wishes to one of the most prolific and talented authors ever!

Karenina




 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    LOL, No need for me to let him know. He'll read your review. Thanks, Terry.
reply by karenina on 21-May-2024
    Smile...He better!