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Two Pals Out for a Walk

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Comment from Julie Helms
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A wonderful, humorous entry! What a personality, that Buddy. I love how the story is centered around peeing and twisted knickers.

I wasn't sure what the second "I" in this sentence was supposed to be:

I struggle to slip on my knickers that got twisted i last night

Thanks for sharing your Buddy with us!
Julie

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 Comment Written 19-May-2024


reply by the author on 19-May-2024
    a faux pas fer sur. the 'i' has been removed. Thanks for spotting it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was adorable! The banter between Master Tom and Bud was so funny. I love Tom's reluctance to leave the warmth of his bed but Bud's urgent need for a bathroom break left him with no choice. Bud's playful threats and antics add a lighthearted touch to the scene, while Tom's exasperation and eventual giving in highlight the bond between them.

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 Comment Written 19-May-2024


reply by the author on 19-May-2024
    What once was will be again if they allow dogs in heaven. Though largely fictional, my bf did come to me in life at first light, and even though he has been gone two years, I still awake at dawn, as if he was prompting me, "It's time to go." I am glad you enjoyed it.