Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

I like this the image of the ocean and its depth with perpetual movement truly is a great metaphor for the restless mind dredging up once-forgotten worries. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 25-May-2024

Thank you very much .

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The sea does throw some odd things to the shore and some gems can be found by beach combers, I enjoyed your metaphor here as a restless mind also throws out the deadwood, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 25-May-2024

Thank you very much

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Loved your personification of the ocean and the simile of a restless mind churning up "deadwood matters" which are like anxious thoughts. Great use of alliteration, too!

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 Comment Written 15-May-2024

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reply by the author on 25-May-2024

Thank you very much, Helen!