Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Storm's a Brewing."Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
when I read about the well running dry once, I started thinking about them possibly having to go to Dr. Monroe's house for water. That might prove interesting. I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens.
Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Hello Gretchen,
when I read about the well running dry once, I started thinking about them possibly having to go to Dr. Monroe's house for water. That might prove interesting. I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens.
Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Ah ha. I hadn't even thought about that. Good thinking. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Poor old Lester subjected to the third degree, but not intentionally by Willis concerning the possibility of a girlfriend, of course we know, but I think I've missed one of your earlier post, I can't keep up, Everybody's writing on steroids, well done, great writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Poor old Lester subjected to the third degree, but not intentionally by Willis concerning the possibility of a girlfriend, of course we know, but I think I've missed one of your earlier post, I can't keep up, Everybody's writing on steroids, well done, great writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Love that! Writing on Steroids. Haha. Thank you for trying to keep up. I have a hard time as well. Gretchen
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Most welcome
Comment from Esther Brown
I love the way you describe the young relationship developing and the siblings. Each person in the story has the feeling of a distinct character who a reader could get attached to. Suggest using alternate wording for the sulfur water smell. Why does it "get like this?". Let me wander down a rabbit trail in my mind wondering if the smell was important to the story? Esther
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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I love the way you describe the young relationship developing and the siblings. Each person in the story has the feeling of a distinct character who a reader could get attached to. Suggest using alternate wording for the sulfur water smell. Why does it "get like this?". Let me wander down a rabbit trail in my mind wondering if the smell was important to the story? Esther
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Not terribly important but just goes to show the hardships of Heddy and the people on the island. When a well runs dry, you're out of luck. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
It ain't the thunder! It's everything else.
Nicely written. Good work.
Nice progress with the various relationships in the story.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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It ain't the thunder! It's everything else.
Nicely written. Good work.
Nice progress with the various relationships in the story.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thanks so much Wayne. This review was greatly appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Such lovely conversations! I particularly liked Momma probing Heddy about Willis. And Heddy's responses that they didn't need to talk because the waves put the demons to sleep. It's as if her parents are awkward around Willis and rely on Heddy to help them out. Hence the reason, I imagine, that Lester is so welcome to create a distraction? Nice anticipation regarding the storm as well. Sounds like there's going to be some drama ahead. Thanks for sharing, Gretchen. Debbie
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reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Such lovely conversations! I particularly liked Momma probing Heddy about Willis. And Heddy's responses that they didn't need to talk because the waves put the demons to sleep. It's as if her parents are awkward around Willis and rely on Heddy to help them out. Hence the reason, I imagine, that Lester is so welcome to create a distraction? Nice anticipation regarding the storm as well. Sounds like there's going to be some drama ahead. Thanks for sharing, Gretchen. Debbie
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Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. Might be a little drama. Lol. Gretchen
