It Can't Be... But It Was
What to do, what to do15 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I love your imagination Wayne, how fun! A Science Fiction writer's big hurrah. A chance for their pretend creation to become a reality.
Your writing was engaging and well expressed. Even in a short work, your characters took form.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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I love your imagination Wayne, how fun! A Science Fiction writer's big hurrah. A chance for their pretend creation to become a reality.
Your writing was engaging and well expressed. Even in a short work, your characters took form.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your very supportive review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Looks like I know who the "winner take all " will be. I hope you do more stories of this type, masking reference to your past writings and characters, to entertain us once more. Good story!
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Looks like I know who the "winner take all " will be. I hope you do more stories of this type, masking reference to your past writings and characters, to entertain us once more. Good story!
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you very much. I greatly appreciate your very nice review.
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See you soon at the top!
Comment from jessizero
I had no idea what cabbage patch meant. (You should have seen what my mind was picturing!) I enjoyed this story. You and Ohmie saved the day! I like the mix of reality and fiction. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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I had no idea what cabbage patch meant. (You should have seen what my mind was picturing!) I enjoyed this story. You and Ohmie saved the day! I like the mix of reality and fiction. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you very much. A appreciate your review!
Comment from Mintybee
This was funny. I enjoyed your sci-fi short story. It was hard for me to follow in places because at first I thought when you wrote osprey you meant a bird, and I don't know what a ditty bag is, or a cabbage patch. Between the jargon and the sci-fi made up stuff, it took some real brain work to follow along, but it was a fun read nevertheless.
Mintybee
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reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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This was funny. I enjoyed your sci-fi short story. It was hard for me to follow in places because at first I thought when you wrote osprey you meant a bird, and I don't know what a ditty bag is, or a cabbage patch. Between the jargon and the sci-fi made up stuff, it took some real brain work to follow along, but it was a fun read nevertheless.
Mintybee
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Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you. I'll go back and make some Author Notes.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, what an action-packed and imaginative story! From the moment the Osprey lands in the backyard to the urgent mission briefing at the White House you've created a gripping story that was filled with tension.
The characters, especially Wayne and Debbie are so well portrayed. Their reactions to the sudden turn of events feel authentic. The dialogue is sharp and engaging, driving the plot forward and revealing crucial information about the threat from the Eullalas. I was on the edge of my seat throughout.
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reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Wow, what an action-packed and imaginative story! From the moment the Osprey lands in the backyard to the urgent mission briefing at the White House you've created a gripping story that was filled with tension.
The characters, especially Wayne and Debbie are so well portrayed. Their reactions to the sudden turn of events feel authentic. The dialogue is sharp and engaging, driving the plot forward and revealing crucial information about the threat from the Eullalas. I was on the edge of my seat throughout.
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Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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You made my day! Thank you for your great review.