Fish Upon A Star(fish)
Purely for FUN!13 total reviews
Comment from EeanBlack
It would be cool if someone wrote a poem with nothing but water related creatures, but that would be super human. I'm looking up some of them, you know cause I'm stupid. lol Don't tell me this was easy.
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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It would be cool if someone wrote a poem with nothing but water related creatures, but that would be super human. I'm looking up some of them, you know cause I'm stupid. lol Don't tell me this was easy.
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Haha Thank you, Eean. Brill! :)
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I think you should show us the true depths of your intellect, cause you ain't no dummy. This is evident in the writing itself. But don't expose toooo much. Once you've read them, you can't un-read them.
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Hi Eean,
Today I'm feeling like a total failure. Tomorrow I'll probably be ok again, but right now I feel like giving up. I'm wallowing in self pity. (see, it happens to everyone) I was hoping to do well in a comp, not Fanstory, writing a poem for children. Heard today I'm nowhere, zilch, binned. I don't normally expect to do well in outside comps but this poem I'm particularly fond of - my grandkids love it. It's like having your baby's head cut off. Grrrr
It's here if you want to see it, no worries if not, it;s longish.
https://moving-poems.com/2024/05/15/searching-for-spring/
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You have grandkids so you didn?t fail. I?ll read it soon thanks
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Hi Eean,
Just to let you know I'm feeling better now. Just heard I got highly commended in a short story comp. I won £40. Yeah! It's the first short story I've ever sent in so chuffed! Sorry about moaning earlier. I should know better :)
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lol. You?re the standard for me at this juncture. I wrote a screenplay in the 1990?s that eventually got rejected. I sold a painting in secondary. Since then I quit. Don?t quit.
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Wait you won a monetary prize you first try?🤢
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write and enjoyed your fishy references here Shirley as this is a delightful read full of our ocean's treasures in the depths of the sea. A magical post and enjoyed skilful poem, you won my last six of the week, a great read, or should I say reed, ha ha ha, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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This is a clever write and enjoyed your fishy references here Shirley as this is a delightful read full of our ocean's treasures in the depths of the sea. A magical post and enjoyed skilful poem, you won my last six of the week, a great read, or should I say reed, ha ha ha, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Wow, Dolly. Thank you so much :)
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You are most welcome Shirley, well deserved x x x
Comment from jessizero
I really enjoyed this poem and its collection of puns! I especially loved that you ended it with "fin." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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I really enjoyed this poem and its collection of puns! I especially loved that you ended it with "fin." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you, Jessi :)
