Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Well written. Great work.
I'm just curious - Did the Germans call WWI 'The Great War'?
Trouble indeed. I thought about Momma and Heddy having to lie as soon as Artie gave it to her. Could be a problem.
Best wishes.

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 Comment Written 11-May-2024

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reply by the author on 11-May-2024

Artie has been stateside for a number of years. He's picked up a lot of American sayings. Not sure if all Gerrmans said it. Thank you for this. Gretchen

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Your Heddy is wonderful, Gretchen! Such a delight. This never gets overly sentimental which is what helps the reader bond so well to her. And the dialogue is, of course, very credible. Every time I read about Artie, I think of the old man in Home Alone. Although, possibly Artie isn't that old.
One small edit:
My father was (in) the Great War.
Another excellent chapter! Debbie

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 Comment Written 11-May-2024

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reply by the author on 11-May-2024

Thank you, Debbie. I'm so glad you are staying with this story. I think this is one of my very favorites. I like all the characters except Mrs. Collette and she serves her purpose. Thank you so much for this incredibly nice review. Gretchen