Sparks
5-7-5 Poem11 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation, Steve.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line with sparks flying.
-An interesting premise about the hereafter.
I'm not in any hurry, but there's no choice, either.
-A creative closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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-Good artwork and presentation, Steve.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line with sparks flying.
-An interesting premise about the hereafter.
I'm not in any hurry, but there's no choice, either.
-A creative closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Thanks, Pam.
I had an interesting split of reviewers who immediately jumped to the conclusion that this was about the afterlife versus those who took it just to mean later on...
Steve
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You are welcome, Steve, and I can see how those two interpretations would have resulted.