Lions and Tigers and Bears
What would I do if I owned a wild animal13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, Rox, that was precious! I love how you write these prose-poems, that is so clever. You don't realise it until it suddenly dawns on you it rhymes. I did enjoy the story and it would make a lovely book, like Gruffalo. I think you were very wise at the end to decide to go to the zoo. Lol. Wonderful job, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Oh, Rox, that was precious! I love how you write these prose-poems, that is so clever. You don't realise it until it suddenly dawns on you it rhymes. I did enjoy the story and it would make a lovely book, like Gruffalo. I think you were very wise at the end to decide to go to the zoo. Lol. Wonderful job, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Yes a zoo is a much better place to see a bear. =} Thanks so much Sandra.
Comment from Nicki Nance
I thought the embedded rhyming really worked for this. I like your plans for Mr Bear, but I am with you. The zoo is close enough. Thanks for sharing this imaginative piece. We'll done.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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I thought the embedded rhyming really worked for this. I like your plans for Mr Bear, but I am with you. The zoo is close enough. Thanks for sharing this imaginative piece. We'll done.
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Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you so much Nicki
Comment from EeanBlack
You should have titled this stitches because that's how it left me, in stitches. Be cautious though bears do tend to be more violent when hungry. Never feed them pizza. Just kidding I wouldn't know.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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You should have titled this stitches because that's how it left me, in stitches. Be cautious though bears do tend to be more violent when hungry. Never feed them pizza. Just kidding I wouldn't know.
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Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Yes the can be very scary animals. They live around me and there have been reports of attacks in other towns. So no bears for me, the zoo is best. I don't think I will try feeding them pizza. =} Thanks so much.
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Put forth a hand full of pizza. Draw back?well, nothin?. I liked it very much.