Living A Lie
Learning you aren't who you thought you were...11 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thoughtt his was great. It was funny and enjoyable to read. Your writing captures what a married couple sounds like! The dialogue flows naturally and I got to know their personalities and relationship. The sudden revelation about Matt's adoption adds an unexpected twist to the story. That was a surprise. Great job at building suspense! I was drawn into the story and enjoyed reading it
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reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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I thoughtt his was great. It was funny and enjoyable to read. Your writing captures what a married couple sounds like! The dialogue flows naturally and I got to know their personalities and relationship. The sudden revelation about Matt's adoption adds an unexpected twist to the story. That was a surprise. Great job at building suspense! I was drawn into the story and enjoyed reading it
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Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so much for your thoughts on the story. I am thrilled that you could feel a true reality to the couple and their interaction. My husband was truly stunned when he first found out about the adoption.
Have a great day!