Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "First Time's the Charm"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from BethShelby
This is funny. Heddy has sealed the deal with a kiss. It is official even if will have to end soon. Lucille is not her rival. I wouldn't be surprised if Lester if Lester likes her better. I'm way behind with reviewing. I may have missed one. I'll go back a look.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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This is funny. Heddy has sealed the deal with a kiss. It is official even if will have to end soon. Lucille is not her rival. I wouldn't be surprised if Lester if Lester likes her better. I'm way behind with reviewing. I may have missed one. I'll go back a look.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you, Beth. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
A stolen kiss seals the deal - a boyfriend.
Nicely written, of course.
I like how Lester doesn't want to confuse himself by visiting both Willis and Artie on the same day.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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A stolen kiss seals the deal - a boyfriend.
Nicely written, of course.
I like how Lester doesn't want to confuse himself by visiting both Willis and Artie on the same day.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Hes bonded with Willis. Artie is still ... German. Thank you. Gretchen
