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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Crossing "Verses of personification
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant post Jessica, on one hand the oak has fallen and on the other it forms a bridge connecting earth to earth, human to human, a fine post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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A poignant post Jessica, on one hand the oak has fallen and on the other it forms a bridge connecting earth to earth, human to human, a fine post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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:) Thank you so much! Xoxo
Comment from June Sargent
Great response to the club challenge. Broken, but still functional and valuable. Like most of us! Enjoyed this Wabi Sabi poem with perfect artwork. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Great response to the club challenge. Broken, but still functional and valuable. Like most of us! Enjoyed this Wabi Sabi poem with perfect artwork. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xoxo
Comment from godlucifer
your command was well describe. thoughts of flaw,thoughts of objects,and thoughts of imagery was well describe. your poem was well told and well written. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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your command was well describe. thoughts of flaw,thoughts of objects,and thoughts of imagery was well describe. your poem was well told and well written. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xoxo
Comment from GoWiSt
Very nice, apt complementary picture art choice.
Very well crafted 3-5-4 traditional haiku here. Excellent imagery from the first two lines, and great interpretation in the third.
A witty, well written haiku. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Very nice, apt complementary picture art choice.
Very well crafted 3-5-4 traditional haiku here. Excellent imagery from the first two lines, and great interpretation in the third.
A witty, well written haiku. Good job.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xoxo
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Jessica, I really liked your haiku for the Wabi-Sabi poem event. The imagery is wonderful. I have always loved the haiku form. I write them occasionally. Ulla xcx
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Oh, Jessica, I really liked your haiku for the Wabi-Sabi poem event. The imagery is wonderful. I have always loved the haiku form. I write them occasionally. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Ulla! Xoxo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. You said a lot in only a few words. The artwork you chose is perfect for this entry. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. You said a lot in only a few words. The artwork you chose is perfect for this entry. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Barbara! Xoxo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A wonderful image of might and support! Although fallen and considered broken, it provides something even more special and symbolic to the world. Dawn Munro wrote a post about all of us being broken to allow the light to come in. I think both hers and your skilful verse are inspiring concepts. Well done, Jess. Take care Debbie xo
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A wonderful image of might and support! Although fallen and considered broken, it provides something even more special and symbolic to the world. Dawn Munro wrote a post about all of us being broken to allow the light to come in. I think both hers and your skilful verse are inspiring concepts. Well done, Jess. Take care Debbie xo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Debbie! Xoxo
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a beautiful Haiku for its imagery, made even more beautiful and meaningful by incorporating the concept of wabi sabi. We often forget that being broken can be the basis for something new and more beautiful, or more useful. Up-cycling!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This is a beautiful Haiku for its imagery, made even more beautiful and meaningful by incorporating the concept of wabi sabi. We often forget that being broken can be the basis for something new and more beautiful, or more useful. Up-cycling!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Ginda! Xoxo
Comment from nomi338
What I see in the fallen tree is the statement, "By any means available." I know the phrase that is more widely known and accepted is, "By any means necessary." But somehow, the more positive is the one I chose. By using the fallen tree as a bridge across the creek, though fallen it provides access to the other side.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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What I see in the fallen tree is the statement, "By any means available." I know the phrase that is more widely known and accepted is, "By any means necessary." But somehow, the more positive is the one I chose. By using the fallen tree as a bridge across the creek, though fallen it provides access to the other side.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Mark Jackson
This haiku beautifully captures the imagery of a fallen oak tree lying across a creek, evoking a sense of both strength and vulnerability. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This haiku beautifully captures the imagery of a fallen oak tree lying across a creek, evoking a sense of both strength and vulnerability. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Mark! Xo