What We See
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Comment from lancellot
Well that went smoothly and everything seemed to work out, with really good people all around.
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which was located in University Park on the south side of Chicago.
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=which was located in University Park, just south of Chicago
He {was} a poker player, and my guess {was} that he was deeply in debt and needed the money quickly.
-He is a poker player, and my guess is that he was deeply in debt and needed the money quickly.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Well that went smoothly and everything seemed to work out, with really good people all around.
notes:
which was located in University Park on the south side of Chicago.
-suggest-
=which was located in University Park, just south of Chicago
He {was} a poker player, and my guess {was} that he was deeply in debt and needed the money quickly.
-He is a poker player, and my guess is that he was deeply in debt and needed the money quickly.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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The story isn't quite over yet, so expect some conflict and tension before the end.
Great suggestions, Lance. Sometimes those tense changes get me. Much appreciated.
Comment from tfawcus
Alan couldn't have asked for a better outcome than that. Now the way seems clear to go ahead. I hope he doesn't find any further impediments to registering his patent.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Alan couldn't have asked for a better outcome than that. Now the way seems clear to go ahead. I hope he doesn't find any further impediments to registering his patent.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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We're done with the patent problems for this invention with a very pleasing conclusion. Still some more action to come, though before the end.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
My goodness, Meyers certainly acted fast and I'm wondering if that $100,000 will ever see the light of day again? Your dialogue, as ever, is excellent, making the scene in Fraleigh's office very real and credible. An enjoyable and informative read, Jim. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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My goodness, Meyers certainly acted fast and I'm wondering if that $100,000 will ever see the light of day again? Your dialogue, as ever, is excellent, making the scene in Fraleigh's office very real and credible. An enjoyable and informative read, Jim. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Warren seems to have gotten away with it, but we can't let him off that easily. Expect an interaction before the end.
Thanks for your continued support of this story, Debbie.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Jim,
Somehow I missed the previous chapter and had to read it first. I've been getting ready to leave for a few weeks and haven't had much time for FS. I really enjoyed this chapter. It sucks that Warren got money, and a lot of money, for something he didn't even invent. It sounds like Alan could really benefit handsomely though from this invention. I'm glad it's working out for him. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Hello Jim,
Somehow I missed the previous chapter and had to read it first. I've been getting ready to leave for a few weeks and haven't had much time for FS. I really enjoyed this chapter. It sucks that Warren got money, and a lot of money, for something he didn't even invent. It sounds like Alan could really benefit handsomely though from this invention. I'm glad it's working out for him. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Yeah, Warren got away with it for now. He may have even earned enough to cover his gambling debts. But you know I can't leave it there. One final encounter before the end.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Jim,
Whew!
This chapter ended on a positive note, and I reading with eagerness how Mr. Fraleigh was going to handle the situation. (Methinks his brother-in-law will be looking for a new job soon!
Realistic dialogue and progression of action and plot.
Much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing, Jim!
diane
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Hello, Jim,
Whew!
This chapter ended on a positive note, and I reading with eagerness how Mr. Fraleigh was going to handle the situation. (Methinks his brother-in-law will be looking for a new job soon!
Realistic dialogue and progression of action and plot.
Much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing, Jim!
diane
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I'm so glad, diane. Thanks very much for your kind comments.
Comment from LJbutterfly
That brought a sigh of relief. I was amazed at the amount of money paid for Alan's invention. Warren was smarted than I thought. He really scored, and probably has enough money to pay his debt and continue gambling. He'll need money. He no longer has a job...at least not with Alan.
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That brought a sigh of relief. I was amazed at the amount of money paid for Alan's invention. Warren was smarted than I thought. He really scored, and probably has enough money to pay his debt and continue gambling. He'll need money. He no longer has a job...at least not with Alan.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Yeah, Warren profited big time and appears to have gotten away with it. Alan still has an interest in getting his hard drive back, so we can expect another encounter with Warren soon.