Making Friends With Grief
It gets better.30 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this very wise contest entry with us. Yes, grief can overcome us. I would have to say, please understand I am NOT a poet, I write prose, but I would say you've nailed this contest. Just in case, good luck.
PS I just enjoy reading poety.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing this very wise contest entry with us. Yes, grief can overcome us. I would have to say, please understand I am NOT a poet, I write prose, but I would say you've nailed this contest. Just in case, good luck.
PS I just enjoy reading poety.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hi Barbara,
Thanks so much for your lovely comments. It's encouraging :)
Comment from Mark Jackson
The language in this poem is both evocative and restrained, allowing the reader to feel the weight of grief without becoming overwhelmed. The imagery is powerful, with each line carefully crafted to evoke a response. You skillfully provide hope, offering moments of light at the end of the darkness.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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The language in this poem is both evocative and restrained, allowing the reader to feel the weight of grief without becoming overwhelmed. The imagery is powerful, with each line carefully crafted to evoke a response. You skillfully provide hope, offering moments of light at the end of the darkness.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Mark for your generous remarks.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I have only one word for this. Exquisite. I wish I had six stars for this, such a beautifully conceived poem expressing the journey through grief to healing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I have only one word for this. Exquisite. I wish I had six stars for this, such a beautifully conceived poem expressing the journey through grief to healing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Ginda. Your words mean a lot.
Comment from Sandollar
I don't usually critique poetry because I am a short-story writer and usually review them. But something made me pick your poem. I'm glad I did. I enjoyed the way the poem flowed. It had a good rhythm to it. Although the subject matter is sad throughout, it's still hopeful. These two lines were my favorite:
the rising of a golden sun
the scarlet beauty when it's done
What a great poem to introduce me to reviewing poetry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I don't usually critique poetry because I am a short-story writer and usually review them. But something made me pick your poem. I'm glad I did. I enjoyed the way the poem flowed. It had a good rhythm to it. Although the subject matter is sad throughout, it's still hopeful. These two lines were my favorite:
the rising of a golden sun
the scarlet beauty when it's done
What a great poem to introduce me to reviewing poetry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hi Sandollar,
Thank you so much. I feel honoured!
Comment from Douglas Goff
I knew this Emotions contest was going to generate some good stuff.
I was going to enter, but could not get a solid answer on if 'sorry' was an emotion. Two DQ's already this month chased me away.
So, this was enjoyable. I expect to see you in the podium.
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I knew this Emotions contest was going to generate some good stuff.
I was going to enter, but could not get a solid answer on if 'sorry' was an emotion. Two DQ's already this month chased me away.
So, this was enjoyable. I expect to see you in the podium.
D
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Douglas. That's very kind.
Comment from HaleyRenae
What a heartfelt and vulnerable piece of work. Your poem flows so elegantly and the visuals I saw flash thru my mind as I read it only enhanced the emotion felt. I have lost three out of four grandparents within the last three years, so this really spoke to me on a personal level.
Very well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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What a heartfelt and vulnerable piece of work. Your poem flows so elegantly and the visuals I saw flash thru my mind as I read it only enhanced the emotion felt. I have lost three out of four grandparents within the last three years, so this really spoke to me on a personal level.
Very well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Haley. I'm so glad you resonated with this x
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful poem for the emotions challenge Shirley. You're right it does get easier when we realise they are with us always in our heart, and thoughts and in the beauty that surrounds us. A lovely read, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is a beautiful poem for the emotions challenge Shirley. You're right it does get easier when we realise they are with us always in our heart, and thoughts and in the beauty that surrounds us. A lovely read, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Pearl.
Comment from QC Poet
Awe inspiring Emotion poem you penned If I weren't out of Six Stars this would definitely have gotten one. Love the way you weaved the ways Nature reminds us of Loved Ones pased on. Thank you for Sharing your poetry Bless you
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Awe inspiring Emotion poem you penned If I weren't out of Six Stars this would definitely have gotten one. Love the way you weaved the ways Nature reminds us of Loved Ones pased on. Thank you for Sharing your poetry Bless you
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your great review.
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your touching poem. It's true ,after we come out of the grief over the loss of someone we realize they are with us in many ways.
we will see them again.
Lovely rhyming and beautiful images throughout.
Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading your touching poem. It's true ,after we come out of the grief over the loss of someone we realize they are with us in many ways.
we will see them again.
Lovely rhyming and beautiful images throughout.
Nancy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Nancy.
Comment from gansach
This poem touches my heart for it's so hard to stop grieving for a loved one's loss and start finding their presence everywhere in the world around us. I've had to do so too many times and it doesn't get easier, but it does come. Your title is perfect, the poem is descriptive and flows easily with the rhythm, the accompanying picture is a beautiful complement. Thank you for sharing it. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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This poem touches my heart for it's so hard to stop grieving for a loved one's loss and start finding their presence everywhere in the world around us. I've had to do so too many times and it doesn't get easier, but it does come. Your title is perfect, the poem is descriptive and flows easily with the rhythm, the accompanying picture is a beautiful complement. Thank you for sharing it. Best wishes!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much.