Comment from Bridge

Excellent

I think haiku are quite difficult to write because of the theme and syllable constraints. Congratulations to you for maintaining all rules. I am in doubt if the last line has 6 syllables but I am not sure. My best wishes to you in your future endeavours.
With kind regards

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thank you very much ...

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nicely written haiku for the club event contest. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may you have a wonderful day. And may you also have a wonderful weekend.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thank you very much.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku, Trees Tremble, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, finds the seasonal changes whispered in the passing winds, which bring a rumor of winter.
The second line has a subject/verb disagreement, which can best be corrected by making WIND plural.
... the-winds-gently-pass-through-them ...

Happy day.


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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for pointig it out .I have corrected it...

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These trembling tree limbs freezing in the breeze and the anticipation of snow is giving me the chills here in your magical and sparkling icy post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thanks for dropping by .