Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction contest. The story hooked me right away, kept my interest and had me cheering at the ending. Nicely done all in 100 words. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024

Thank you for the kind words.

Comment from C.M. Brown

Exceptional

I love it! So much in one quick story. Hence flash fiction, right! I kept thinking there was another reason why her breast was showing but the end really surprised me and totally reminded me of how I felt being with my friends that are nursing. Great job!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024

Thank you for the 6 stars and the kind words, Many blessings.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Today breast-feeding in public would probably go unnoticed in many restaurants.
I like how you characterize the husband (conservative and self-conscious for her) and wife (a bit of a rebel) through dialog and their actions.
Rod

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024

Thank you for the wonderful review.