Eternity's Kraken
an essence poem16 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Bill,
Ingenious rhyming scheme for this contest entry. Good luck in the biting.
Kraken is an unusual name, which might need an explanation in your note section. I am OK with cracking or crackin' (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Bill,
Ingenious rhyming scheme for this contest entry. Good luck in the biting.
Kraken is an unusual name, which might need an explanation in your note section. I am OK with cracking or crackin' (-;
Mark
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Mark. Kraken is a monster.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The only kraken I'm familiar with is the science fiction novel 'the kraken wakes'. I guess that really doesn't make me fit to review this poem, other than to note that it is technically correct (and you'd be surprised how rare that is). kay
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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The only kraken I'm familiar with is the science fiction novel 'the kraken wakes'. I guess that really doesn't make me fit to review this poem, other than to note that it is technically correct (and you'd be surprised how rare that is). kay
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks?
Comment from nomi338
Absolutely! If you want to disturb a nation, dry up its access to goods and joys of life by destroying its money. If I can't afford the things I need for my family and myself, there is going to be trouble like you never saw.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Absolutely! If you want to disturb a nation, dry up its access to goods and joys of life by destroying its money. If I can't afford the things I need for my family and myself, there is going to be trouble like you never saw.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you, nomi
Comment from Julie Helms
My husband was just talking this morning about one crypto that's tied to gold is doing well. Not my wheelhouse, so don't completely understand what it all means.
However, your two-line poem has the right rhyme scheme with the correct number syllables!
Julie
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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My husband was just talking this morning about one crypto that's tied to gold is doing well. Not my wheelhouse, so don't completely understand what it all means.
However, your two-line poem has the right rhyme scheme with the correct number syllables!
Julie
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Julie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, the economy is slip sliding downwards and we know what that is like as the US economy has a knock on effect around the world, a poignant post, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Oh dear, the economy is slip sliding downwards and we know what that is like as the US economy has a knock on effect around the world, a poignant post, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from jessizero
This was a great two line poem. You got the internal and ending lines right, and you expressed yourself without many words. That's impressive. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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This was a great two line poem. You got the internal and ending lines right, and you expressed yourself without many words. That's impressive. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Jessizero