Our Hands, Eyes, Legs, And Knees
We use them so many times.11 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments here in your poem for the contest and wish you luck.
Just one suggestion for this line:
With a child, play
(With child at play)
Love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed the sentiments here in your poem for the contest and wish you luck.
Just one suggestion for this line:
With a child, play
(With child at play)
Love Dolly x x x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Dolly, my line is correct.😊
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It was just a suggestion for improvement. I wish you luck x
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Thank you so much
