Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice tanka that you have present us with and I enjoyed reading it. I wish wish you the very best with all of your writing. Your presentation here is beautiful. Patricia .

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

You have such a creative fun mind. It is so full of interesting and good creative images and ideas.

This was a really neat exchange of verse, almost like leaving love letters. Very cool.
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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024

Yes, tanka was created by poets in the Japanese Imperial Court. The lovers wrote tanka poems for each other after a night of love making. Tanka is my favorite form. I like the passion.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, my friend.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

nice alliteration and imagery
with smooth flow of words
and cool pics, too
excellent!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Totally awesome image. Thanks for the notes. It helped as I am not familiar with this style of Japanese poetry. You certainly have done it justice. Thanks for sharing.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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